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Posts: 556 12/04/11 07:15 PM Reply Quote More Recent Posts	Here's episode 1. I guess there's no interest to gauge if there's nothing to read. Please let me know if you're interested so I know if I should continue or not. EPISODE 1 - "Not quite the Taj Mahal' Day 1 Spoiler [+] (Jeff Probst can be standing on a beach, crystal blue waters behind him. As he talks, shots of wildlife and sea life, as well as aerial shots of the Maldives are shown.) Jeff Probst: I’m standing on a beach, facing out onto the beautiful Indian ocean. This is the Maldives, an archipelago 250 miles from the coast of India. Comprising of over 1,000 seperate islands, 200 of which are inhabitated, it plays host to an array of beautiful wildlife, as well as vast coral reefs which play home to over 300 species of fish, as well as sharks, stingrays and sea turtles. (A motor boat, which has the 18 Survivor contestants on board is shown. Various close ups are displayed.) Jeff Probst: Fast approaching me are 18 people. They are strangers from different walks of life, who will be forced to work together to create a new society, whilst battling the elements, and each other. They must learn to adapt or they’ll be voted out of the tribe. In the end, only one will remain to claim the million dollar prize. (Rapid closeup of all 18 are shown as the music builds. A close up of Jeff is then shown, as the boat approaches over his shoulder.) Jeff Probst: 39 days, 18 people, 1 Survivor. INTRO Andy Anna Caroline David Gael Joe Lina Maria Murray 39 DAYS Neil Petra Rafael Robin Roger Sabine Samantha Serena Vera ONE SURVIVOR SURVIVOR:MALDIVES (The boat approaches the beach and the castaways jump off into the shallow waters and gather on the beach.) Jeff Probst: Come on in guys. Maria (confessional): When I stepped off that boat and saw Jeff, that was when it finally hit me. I’m on Survivor. This is really happening. Petra (confessional): The water was absolutely beautiful, the beach stretched as far as I could see, the palmtrees were ahead of us. It was almost too much to take in, you know. Andy (confessional): Everybody was all smiles but I was thinking to myself...the game starts here. Playtimes over. (All 18 stand in a big group as Jeff speaks to them.) Jeff Probst: Welcome to the Maldives. Take a moment to take it all in. This may be your only chance to do so, without thinking about the game. Thinking about strategy. (Several castaways are seen looking around.) Jeff Probst: What do you guys think? (The castaways nod their heads, expressing approval.) Caroline: Beautiful, Jeff. Rafael: Paradise. Better than paradise, even. Jeff Probst: Well, I’m good you took the opportunity to enjoy your surroundings, because it’s time for your first immunity challenge. (The castaways look shocked.) Neil (confessional): When Jeff said, it’s time for the challenge, I thought ‘Holy crap’. No time to adjust. I guess you gotta expect the unexpected in Survivor. Jeff Probst: We’ll have the men on my left, women on my right. (The sexes separate to two separate groups.) Samantha (confessional): I was really happy when the men and women were separated. Time to show them who’s boss. Jeff Probst: One man and one woman will win immunity today. It will be valid for your tribe’s first visit to Tribal Council, so you’re guaranteed not to be first out. Here’s how the challenge will work. · INDIVIDUAL IMMUNITY CHALLENGE: At the other end of this beach is an immunity necklace. All you have to do is pick one up and bring it back, past the finish line. Sounds simple, but it’ll be harder than you think. The necklace can be intercepted by anyone by any means necessary. Anything goes. You can play as dirty, or as clean as you like. Strategy will play an important part, and I’m not giving any pointers. You’ll have to think on your feet if you want that immunity. Jeff Probst: Each gender will play separately. First the women, then the men. Everybody understand. (Everyone nods.) Jeff Probst: Women, put down your bags and line up behind the line. We’ll get started. (The scene cuts ahead to the 9 women lined up behind the start/finish line.) Jeff Probst: Survivors ready. Go! (The women sprint off down the beach. A few are seen hanging back as Samantha reaches the necklace. However, as she sets off back, she is immediately tackled by Serena.) Jeff Probst: Samantha takes a hard fall. Serena grabs it. ( She snatches the necklace from her grasp and tentively sets off, dodging out of the way of Anna. Lina tries to intercept her as Serena holds the necklace out of the shorter girls grasp as she continues to run.) Jeff Probst: Lina tries to jump and grab it, but she’s too small. It’s just out of reach. (She then stumbles and falls, although she keeps hold of the necklace. Lina and Samantha catch up with her from behind but Serena gets away.) Jeff Probst: Serena, almost losing it. (However, Vera, who has been waiting by the finish line, takes her by surprise, snatching the necklace off her and crossing the line before Serena can react.) Jeff Probst: At the last second, Vera wins Immunity! (Vera smiles, as the men applaud from the sidelines. She puts on the necklace.) Joe: You go girl! Vera (confessional): I was so happy. Knowing I wouldn’t be the first out. It was a great feeling. Serena (confessional): I was slightly bitter because...I did all the work. I deserved that Immunity. Jeff Probst: Vera, how you feeling. (Vera laughs, clearly happy. Serena looks over as she crouches down, clearly out of breath.) Vera: Awesome. Just awesome. Jeff Probst: Bad luck everybody else. If you’d take a seat on the bench over here, it’s time for the men. (The men are now shown behind the line. A new Immunity necklace now hangs at the end of the beach.) Jeff Probst: Survivors ready. Go! (The men set off. Noticably, a few men hang back, having seen Vera’s tactic.) Jeff Probst: Some of the men, hanging back. Taking a leaf out of Vera’s book. (Joe jogs over to the necklace, looking behind him, unsure if he should take it. He does and begins to sprint back.) Jeff Probst: Joe, takes a chance, makes a run for it. ( He dodges Gael and Andy and runs past them but then Andy jumps on Joes back. Joe slows down but continues moving forward as Andy tries to get the necklace out of his hand.) Jeff Probst: Andy, on Joe’s back. Still can’t quite reach it.) Roger manages to take advantage and knocks the necklace out of Joes hand and picking it up. Whilst Roger is running away, Neil gets Rafaels attention.) Neil (whispering): We should work together. If you tackle him and let me have the immunity, I’ll protect you. (Rafael thinks for a second and then nods OK.) Jeff Probst: Neil and Rafael, whispering to each other. Are they working together? (Rafael runs up to Roger and floors him, allowing Neil to sneak in and pick up the necklace. He sprints past the finish line as the woman cheer.) Jeff Probst: Neil wins the second Immunity! Teamwork paying off. (Rafael congratulates Neil and they share a hug.) Neil: Thanks man, I owe you. Neil (confessional): I realised during the challenge that, if I could get someone to help me, we could take the others by surprise. Looks like my strategy worked. Rafael (confessional): I agreed to help Neil because, it sounded like a good plan, and he obviously had a very strategic mind, so it was good to get on his good side, kind of form an early alliance. It might help me in the long run. (Andy looks on and shakes his head.) Andy (confessional): Neil and Rafael, helping each other like that. I think it kind of put a target on their backs for me. They’re already an obvious alliance and I knew, if they were on the same tribe, that they would need to be watched. (Andy taps David on the shoulder.) Andy (whispering): We need to watch them. David (whispering): I agree. Jeff Probst: Okay, Neil and Vera come up and join me. (Neil and Vera join Jeff, both wearing their necklaces. The rest of the group assembles into a group of guys and a group of girls.) Jeff Probst: Vera and Neil, you are safe from your tribe’s first tribal council. Neil, feeling good? Neil: Of course Jeff, but at the same time you don’t want to be drawing too much attention to yourself on day 1. Jeff: So you’re saying this could hurt you. Neil: Potentially. Jeff Probst: Vera, do you agree? Vera: Totally. But I think I can work with the girls and hopefully they’ll see me as someone they wanna keep around at the second Tribal Council, you know? Jeff Probst: Now, you said about working with the girls. What do you mean by that? Vera: I mean, it seems to me that the guys and girls were separated. That we’d be on opposite tribes. Jeff Probst: Neil, get that impression? (Neil shrugs). Neil: I assumed that but...I know it’s not wise to assume things in Survivor, Jeff. Jeff Probst: The right attitude to take it seems. You will not be men vs. Women, as you might have assumed. It’s time to pick the tribes. But this isn’t a Pick’em. The tribes will be chosen at random. (Jeff unveils two traditional Maldavian vases and places them on a table.) Jeff Probst: One of these vases contains the names of the men. One, the names of the women. In turns, you two will each pick a name out of alternating vases, starting with the opposite sex. From this, we will form our tribes. Make sense. (Neil and Vera nod. A close up of Petra is shown, who looks shocked. Andy is shown smiling and nodding his head.) Jeff Probst: Okay, ladies first. Vera, you are picking a name out of the men’s vase first. (Vera steps up to the vase and puts her hand in.) Jeff Probst: Have a good rummage in there. (Vera takes her hand out.) Vera: Murray. (Murray smiles and walks over to Vera.) Jeff Probst: Neil, your turn. You’re picking a girl. Neil: Lina. (Neil and Vera alternate vases as they select their tribe.) Vera: Caroline. Neil: Joe Vera: Rafael Neil (confessional): When Rafael was picked for Vera’s tribe I thought to myself, oh (censored). This guy put his neck on the line for me, and now I have no way to repay him. That sucks. Neil: Samantha Vera: Serena Neil: Gael Vera: David Neil: Sabine Vera: Maria Neil: Andy Vera: Roger Neil: Petra (The two tribes are shown standing together.) Jeff Probst: So, these are our new tribes. Vera and Neil come up and collect your buffs and your map to your camp. Vera, your tribe is called GOMA. You will always wear blue. Neil, your tribe is RAITUHN. You will wear green. You need to build a shelter before nightfall so, its probably about time you got on your way. Good luck, and I’ll see you at the first tribal immunity challenge. (Both tribes are seen walking in opposite directions) GOMA TRIBE – DAY 1 (The GOMA TRIBE are seen arriving at their camp. Maria points to the flag.) Maria: Look, there’s the flag. Vera (confessional): It was such a good feeling, coming in to camp. And when we got there we all gathered round in a circle. Kind of introduced ourselves. (The tribe is seen sitting in a circle.) Murray: Hi. I’m Murray, I’m 22 and I’m currently a student. Roger: What do you study? Murray: Math. Er, I’m doing a Math degree. Roger (confessional): Murray, he seems like a good kid. He studies Mathematics, so he’s obviously smart, but he also seemed really happy and friendly. I’m looking forward to getting to know him more. Roger: I’m Roger, and I’m 38 and I’m a farmer. Caroline: I’m a waitress. Caroline (confessional): I didn’t want to tell my tribe that I was a professional model, I thought that could cause friction with some people, so I said I was a waitress. Something believable, but then they started asking me questions. I really had to think on my feet. Maria: Where do you waitress? Caroline: Er, a restaurant in Manhattan. Er, Chez Gerard. Vera: I love that restaurant. I go all the time. Isn’t the food great? Maybe you’ve served me? Caroline (confessional): And it turned out, Vera’s a regular. Arkward. (Caroline laughs nervously). Rafael: My name is Rafael, although everyone calls me Rafa. Back home I’m a nurse. Maria: Oh wow. That’s so cool. Maria (confessional): Rafa is just a little cutie pie. And, he’s a nurse, which is pretty hot. I mean, not as hot as a doctor but it still does the trick. David: I’m David, and I’m an architect. Serena: Get him working on the shelter. Right now. David (confessional): As an architect, I obviously know a lot about building and structures. The fact that I can provide some expert knowledge on our shelter, I think it will show to the tribe I’m valuable, and they’ll want to keep me around. Murray (confessional): All in all, I feel we all got to know each other well. We already feel like a family. I don’t want to vote anybody off right now. RAITUHN TRIBE – DAY 1 (The tribe is shown arriving at camp) Joe (confessional): As soon as we arrived it was straight to work. There wasn’t really a getting to know you period, which I would have liked, but the decision was made that we should be working on the shelter and getting water, so that’s what we did. Joe: (to Gael) Do you want to help with the shelter? Gael: Sure. Neil (confessional): Me, Gael, Joe and Andy. We started collecting materials for the shelter. Joe seemed to know quite a lot about what we needed, I think he had a lot of knowledge, but Andy, he thought he knew too. Andy: We need to build it here. Closer to these trees. Joe (calmly): Trust me. We’ll have coconuts crashing through the roof in no time if we build it there. I know about these things. (Robin can be seen looking over.) Robin (confessional): I was trying to get a fire started, and I could hear Joe and Andy. Joe was all calm, and you could tell Andy was getting more irate. He really wanted to be in charge. Andy: Fine. Whatever. Andy (confessional): I thought the shelter wasn’t in the best location but Joe wouldn’t even listen to me. He was acting all Mr. Know-it-all. Douchebag. (Lina and Petra are seen walking through the jungle.) Lina (confessional): I went with Petra to find the water, and she is such a sweetheart. Petra: The trees are so beautiful, don’t you think. Lina (confessional): She obviously loves being out here already. Her excitement is contagious. Petra: Oh my gosh, this is it! It’s the water. (She jumps up and down as Lina laughs.) Petra (confessional): Me and Lina found the water, which felt real good. I’ve never been so excited to see water in my life before. (Petra hugs Lina, who looks pleasantly surprised by it as she hugs back.) GOMA TRIBE – DAY 1 Serena (confessional): I came back with some water, expecting David and the rest to be building shelter, but there was still nothing there. Serena: Where’s the shelter? (Anna shrugs her shoulders. David can be seen drawing a plan on the sand.) Serena: What you doing? David: I’m trying to plan the shelter. David (confessional): I didn’t want to build a bad shelter, so I took my time, planning it and stuff. Stupidly, I totally forgot that we were quickly running out of day light. I probably spent too long in the planning stage, looking back now. Serena: I think we should just start building now. Anyone agree? David: Just wait another half hour or so? Serena: We don’t have half an hour? We need to start now? (Murray and Rafael are shown, looking on nervously.) David: I know what I’m doing. We’ll be fine. Roger (confessional): I didn’t want things to get heated, so I kinda intervened. It was only day 1, we couldn’t start with an argument. Roger: How about, David, you tell us what materials you think we’ll need. Me and Serena, and whoever else wants to, we’ll collect them. Some of us can clear an area and you can finish off your plans. Sound good? (David nods.) Serena: I guess. Murray (confessional): I was so happy Roger stepped in. I was just watching, unsure of what to do and I really respected him for easing the situation. Murray: I’ll go get some materials too. GOMA TRIBE – NIGHT 1 (We cut to later as the tribe works on the shelter. It’s getting noticeably dark.) Serena (confessional): It was dark and we’re still weren’t finished, and it was getting hard to see. We had no fire so we couldn’t see what we were doing. We started way too late because of David, and he was bossing around as well which didn’t help. (David runs over to Anna.) David: Stop, you’re doing it wrong. Anna: Can you show me? David: I’ll just do it. (He takes her position, as Anna looks on, confused.) Maria (confessional): David was really rude to a lot of us. I mean it was night. We could hardly see, and we weren’t experts at this. Of course we we’re gonna make mistakes. Rafael: (censored). My hand. Rafael (confessional): I hurt my hand, trying to build the shelter. That sucked. Day 1, injured already. David (confessional): Everyone was working so slow, so we decided to call it a night. We weren’t finished, but we needed to sleep and we just had to sleep on what we had. (The tribe can be seen trying to get comfortable.) Vera: Let’s hope there’s no rain Day 2 Spoiler [+] RAITUHN TRIBE – DAY 2: (It’s day, as Joe tries to start a fire.) Joe (confessional): Shelters done, today, it was all about the fire. Lina: Any luck? (Joe shakes his head. Andy looks on and smirks) Andy (confessional): I was so happy when Joe couldn’t start the fire. Serves that douche right for trying to build the shelter the way he did. I mean, I couldn’t do much better probably but, I wasn’t gonna bust my ass and embarrass myself. Joe: You wanna help? (Andy shakes his head.) Andy: No way man. Joe (confessional): Andy just likes to cause trouble it seems. He doesn’t like me for some reason. Why? Jealousy, maybe. He’s hurt that his shelter idea wasn’t used but, that isn’t my fault. His idea sucked. I hope he can put it behind him. That’s what I would do in his situation. (Petra can be seen sitting in the shelter.) Petra (confessional): We have a kick-ass shelter, thanks to the guys. Surprisingly, I think we all had a really good nights sleep. For what we need, it’s perfect. Petra: Great shelter. (Petra and Neil bump fists, before giggling.) Neil: We are so lame. GOMA TRIBE – DAY 2 (Anna and Rafael are shown looking grumpy.) Anna (confessional): The nights sleep was horrible. The shelter was unfinished and my back is killing me today. Hopefully today we can get it finished as soon as possible. David: Come on guys, let’s get to work. Serena: How can you be so cheery? Serena (confessional): David is annoying the hell out of me. We’re all grumpy and tired because the shelter was unfinished last night and he’s all ‘Get up. Work!’ y’know, real bossy. He ain’t no emperor or nothing. (Various tribes are shown wearily working on the shelter.) David (confessional): I admit, my plans were maybe too complicated for the time we had yesterday. But I knew that the shelter would be great so, I wasn’t too bothered that last night was bad. In the long run, we’d be comfortable. (We cut to later in the day, where we see the shelter. It doesn’t seem as impressive as RAITUHN’s.) David: Voila. We’re done. (Roger gives him a confused look.) Caroline (confessional): He was like, we’re done, and i was like, What?! That’s it. I mean, the amount of time he spent planning, I was expecting something better than that. Not quite the Taj Mahal, as he led us to believe. (Serena is shown lying down.) Serena: It’s still uncomfortable. David: It isn’t going to be as good as a mattress. This is island comfort. Serena (quietly): Comfort, my ass. (Maria and Rafael are shown walking through the jungle. Rafael points to a tree.) Rafael: Is that some? Maria (confessional): Me and Rafa, we went looking for fruit, something we could eat, because we still had no fire. And Rafa spotted this mango tree. Maria: You gonna climb it. (Rafael nods as he begins to shimmy up the tree. Maria looks impressed.) Maria (confessional): He then preceded to climb up a bunch of trees, we got loads of stuff. Is there anything this guy can’t do? (Rafael begins to drop fruit as Maria catches it in a sheet.) Rafael (confessional): I think Maria has a crush on me, which is awkward, because I’m gay, so...I wasn’t planning on telling anybody, because it’s nobody’s business, I don’t think, but is she starts making moves on me, I guess I’ll have to. I don’t think it’ll be good for my gameplay to be breaking hearts. (Maria and Rafael return to camp, carrying the fruit.) Maria: Honey, I’m home! Anna: Oh my god, that’s amazing. Maria: It was all Rafa. (Rafa smiles, obviously shy and embarrassed.) Rafael: You helped too. Maria: You’re so humble. (She playfully hits Rafa as he smiles arkwardly.) Day 3 Spoiler [+] RAITUHN TRIBE – DAY 3 (Petra is seen walking towards treemail with Samantha.) Petra: Oh my god. There’s mail in there! Petra (confessional): I was sooo happy I got to go get the first treemail. So exciting. (Back at camp, Petra reads from a scroll.) Petra: You’ve made your camp, you’ve made your beds. Now comes the time for your first test. Grab a paddle, extend your reach If you want to remain on your tribe’s beach. Robin: I guess we’re rowing. Neil: I guess so. IMMUNITY/REWARD CHALLENGE Jeff Probst: Come on in guys. (Both tribes are seen, approaching their respective mats on the beach. Two rowing boats, one blue, one yellow, can be seen.) Jeff Probst: First off, RAITUHN, how are you settling in? Samantha? Samantha: Great Jeff. We’ve got a great shelter. Jeff Probst: Serena? How about at GOMA? Serena: Could be better? (David can be seen looking annoyed.) Jeff Probst: Care to explain. Serena: We stayed up all the first night building shelter, because David wanted to plan it. And then, it’s still uncomfortable. Jeff Probst: Any tribe have fire yet? (Both tribes express a negative response.) Jeff Probst: Then today’s challenge is of upmost importance. IMMUNITY CHALLENGE: · As a tribe, you must paddle a rowing boat out to sea, collecting bags of puzzle pieces as you go. When you have collected all the pieces, you must row back and assemble the puzzle, which will be a picture of the Survivor: Maldives logo. First tribe to assemble their puzzle wins immunity and reward. Jeff Probst: Want to know what you’re playing for? (Jeff holds up flint.) Jeff Probst: Flint. This will give you fire. And you’re also playing for this. (Jeff unveils the Immunity Idol.) Jeff Probst: Immunity. Safety from tribal council, 3 more days in this game. The losing tribe will go to tribal council tonight, vote somebody out. A position nobody wants to be in. Worth playing for? (The tribes agree) Jeff Probst: I’ll give you a moment to strategise, then we’ll begin. Survivors ready! Go. · RAITUHN off to a good start. First out into the water. · GOMA trailing behind. Need to pick up the pace. · Petra grabs the first bag for RAITUHN. · Murray gets GOMA’s first bag. Slowly catching up. · RAITUHN with the second bag. · GOMA, now have their second bag. · RAITUHN have their third and final bag. Time to head back. · GOMA on their way back now. Already looking very tired. · RAITUHN return to shore. Time to start assembling your puzzle. · GOMA, falling further behind. They need to start paddling faster, if they want a chance. · RAITUHN, struggling with the puzzle as GOMA get to shore. Still in this. · David and Serena, can’t agree on how the puzzle should fit for GOMA. · RAITUHN think they have it. Jeff Probst: RAITUHN wins Immunity!!! (RAITUHN celebrate as GOMA look on in dismay. David puts his head in his hands.) Andy: Hell yeah! Jeff Probst: RAITUHN, here’s your flint, and the immunity idol. GOMA, I have nothing for you. Head back to camp, I’ll see you at Tribal Council. (Joe lifts the idol in the air as a dejected GOMA walk away back to camp.) RAITUHN TRIBE – DAY 3 Joe (confessional): Returning to camp, everyone was so happy. Winning that immunity really boosted everyone’s spirits. (Robin is shown lighting the fire.) Robin (confessional): The flint is a God-send. We now have fire, warmth, we can boil and drink water. And I got to light the fire, a great honor. (The tribe cheers as the fire lights.) Neil: Well done, everybody. Good job. GOMA TRIBE – DAY 3 David (confessional): Getting back to camp, I knew I was on the chopping block. Nobody was happy with my shelter and I think I got off on the bad foot with everybody. So I spoke with a few people, tried to get some people on my side. (David speaks to Rafael.) David: I’m strong, y’know. I could be a real asset out here. I don’t think I should go. Rafael: Who do you have in mind? David: I say Serena. She’s loud, and I don’t remember her doing much in the challenge. Rafael (confessional): David’s obviously a fit guy, he’s in shape, so his argument has a valid point. (Murray and Roger have now joined the conversation.) David: So, are we all agreed on voting Serena. David (confessional): I spoke with the guys, we’ve agreed to vote for Serena. I think I did a pretty good job convincing them it would be in the tribes best interest to keep me. David: Can you try and convince a few of the girls? Murray: I’ll give it a go. Roger (confessional): I’m torn. David’s argument about challenges is an interesting one, but I don’t think he contributed much more than most people in today’s challenge. If anything, his arguing slowed us down and I feel he’s targeting Serena on a more personal level. (Rafael is shown talking with Maria.) Rafael: What would you say if we vote for Serena? Maria: Why? Rafael (confessional): I think I could convince Maria to vote with the guys. We already have a friendship and so an alliance is a natural route to take. Rafael: Challenges. He’ll be great in them. We should at least keep him until closer to the merge. He could be a good alliance partner. Maria (confessional): I’m really happy Rafa chose me to be in an alliance. I think we could go far together. (Serena is standing near the shelter with Vera, Anna and Caroline.) Serena: We all voting David? (They nod in agreement.) Serena (confessional): David is gone tonight. Anybody not voting him out is a dumbass. Tribal Council Spoiler [+] TRIBAL COUNCIL – GOMA Jeff Probst: Come on in guys. Grab a torch, light it in the fire. (The castaways light their torches.) Jeff probst: Fire represents your life in this game. (The tribe sits down.) Jeff probst: First question. Vera. On Day 1, you won immunity. Did that have any impact on your integration with the tribe? Vera: Not at all, I mean, we all sat down at camp, introduced ourselves. Nobody treated me any differently. Jeff Probst: Do you think people see you as a threat, winning that challenge? Vera: I think it makes me more of an asset right now, the ability to help win challenges. Jeff Probst: David, looks like you want to say something? Agree with Vera? David: I do. Right now, we need to be winning challenges, we need to keep our strongest players. Jeff Probst: Does that include yourself? David: Almost definitely. I feel like, maybe I got off on the wrong foot with the tribe, but I will be an asset in challenges. I can assure you. The shelter was a little mistake... Serena: A little mistake? We had to sleep on an unfinished shelter because of your incompetence. Jeff Probst: Serena, obviously not agreeing with David there. Serena: No way. I told him we should have started building a shelter long before we did. But he said “Noooo, I gotta plan”. (Anna giggles at Serena’s impression of David.) David: I would hardly say I was incompetent. Yes, we started late, but we managed to get a great shelter out of it. Serena: It’s not even that good. Jeff Probst: Roger, know who you’re voting for tonight? Roger: It’s very hard, because we’ve been out here for only 3 days. I don’t think you can really get to grips with anybody in that short amount of time. If anything, I’m still not 100% decided. Jeff Probst: What about you, Maria? Maria: Like Roger said, it’s tough, but I’ve come to a decision. Jeff Probst: Well, it’s time to vote. Vera has immunity for this tribal council, she cannot be voted out. Everyone else is fair game. Anna, we’ll start with you. (GOMA casts their vote. Shown voting confessionals below) Serena: (voting for David): The shelter sucks, your bossy. You’ve tried to apologise but, too little, too late. David: (voting for Serena): You haven’t given me a chance. I really hope that people will see that you’re too loud and obnoxious. Rafael (voting for Serena): I feel like I’m taking a risk voting for you. I hope the others pull through. Roger (vote not shown): I’ve thought long and hard about my decision. I’m really sorry, I wish I’d got to know you better. Jeff Probst: I’ll go tally the votes. (Jeff leaves the main council area and returns with the voting urn.) Jeff Probst: Once the votes are read, the decision is final. The person will asked to leave the Tribal Council area immediately. I’ll read the votes. First vote, Serena David, one vote Serenam once vote David. David. Serena Serena, three for Serena, two for David David Serena David Four votes David, four votes Serena. One vote left. First person votes out of Survivor: Maldives David. Jeff Probst: David, you need to bring me your torch. David: Good luck guys. Jeff Probst: David, the tribe has spoken. It’s time for you to go. (Jeff puts out David’s flame and waves goodbye to the tribe as he leaves.) Jeff Probst: You’ve survived your first Tribal Council. But don’t get too cocky. Remember, Survivor is a sprint, not a marathon. As you don’t have fire yet, your torches will remain here. Grab your belongings head back to camp. (The castaways leave Tribal Council.) David’s last words: It sucks to be out first but, I still had a great time. This is a once in a lifetime experience and I’m so grateful to be given this opportunity. I guess I’m more suited to designing actual buildings than beach huts. Go GOMA! I’ll be rooting for you. Tribal Council Votes: Anna - David Caroline - David David - Serena Maria - Serena Murray - Serena Rafael - Serena Roger - David Serena - David Vera - David Last Edited By: Cool Beans 12/05/11 07:29 PM. Edited 1 times.
burningsceptre		#2	[-]
Posts: 626 12/04/11 07:26 PM Reply Quote More Recent Posts	GO CAROLINE <3
phant0m		#3	[-]
Posts: 2543 12/04/11 08:21 PM Reply Quote More Recent Posts	put the stuff in spoiler tags
Bones979		#4	[-]
Posts: 3692 12/04/11 10:04 PM Reply Quote More Recent Posts	This is well-written.
humanhumanitarian		#5	[-]
Posts: 1042 12/04/11 11:24 PM Reply Quote More Recent Posts	I like this. Keep writing this please :)
Alex Shallow		#6	[-]
Posts: 5502 12/04/11 11:27 PM Reply Quote More Recent Posts	Liked the episode and I love how Serena stayed.
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Posts: 352 12/05/11 03:12 AM Reply Quote More Recent Posts	Go Serena and Petra <3
Cool Beans	Episode 1 notes	#8	[-]
Posts: 556 12/05/11 04:41 AM Reply Quote More Recent Posts	phant0m wrote: put the stuff in spoiler tags Do you mean the whole episode or just the tribal council result? Thanks for all your comments. Makes me really happy people are enjoying this already. Really interesting to see who people decide to root for. Here's a few things I wanted to mention about episode 1: I really liked the idea of the Individual Challenge in my head, but reading it back, I don't think it worked so well on paper. Also, I originally imagined saying more about people thinking it would be men vs. women, but in the end I found it was better for the episode if I dwelled on that less, seeing as it didn't have much effect. I would have cut it out completely if it didn't affect the decision of Rafael and Neil to work together (they thought they were already on the same tribe). I got the tribe names from the Maldives season of Survivor South Africa. I have not seen any episodes of the South African version and it won't affect my story in any way. I just needed some tribe names as I suck at coming up with them. The merge tribe is still unnamed so I may need help from you lovely readers when the merge episode rolls around. The two challenge write-ups have two different styles, which I feel I should explain. The first challenge I wrote with my description of the action, plus Jeff's commentary. However, the second challenge, I decided to just list Jeff's commentary in list form. I still think you got a good idea of what was going on. As no-one was really doing anything apart from rowing, the description was way too repetitive. Which did you guys prefer? I realise, like an actual episode of Survivor, not everyone was featured overly strongly. I'm going to try my best to make sure the editing over the whole season is well balanced. Obviously, some people will get more focus than others, but I want you to remember who people are by the time the reunion comes around (hopefully I get that far.) As I said in the first post, the outcome for the most part is set in stone. I've 'forecasted' how each episode plays out challenge and tribal council wise. The challenges are decided at random, just to add to the challenge of my writing. I feel that would be out of the producers hands on a real season, so it's out of mine too. However, all tribal council votes reflect the persons alliances and personality. A few times, I've sent people home who I want to stay and would love to write more, but the votes just wouldn't makes sense based on the previous episodes. I hope to have episode 2 up within the next few days. Remember, keep commenting. Criticism is welcome, as I'm always willing to improve. Although don't let that stop you praising me if that's what you wanna do
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Posts: 1737 12/05/11 03:00 PM Reply Quote More Recent Posts	Wow, this is very good! Keep it going!
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Posts: 393 12/05/11 05:00 PM Reply Quote More Recent Posts	Put the whole episode in spoiler tags is my only gripe! I loved the way it was written! Keep it up!
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Cool Beans		#11	[-]
Posts: 556 12/05/11 07:38 PM Reply Quote More Recent Posts	I've tried to put the episode in spoiler tags, separated into the scenes from each day. For some reason, it's not letting me do it for Day 1 but it worked for Day 2, Day 3 and Tribal Council. I'm getting episode 2 written much quicker than expected. Hopefully I'll have it up soon. Here's a quick promo I made: Episode 2 - 'Testosterone Time' Jeff Probst: Next time on Survivor.... At RAITUHN, tensions flare up between the castaways: (Petra is standing in front of Andy.) Petra: Show some respect! Petra (confessional): Andy, urgh! He’s the most obnoxious person I’ve ever met. And at the immunity challenge, disaster strikes: (Lina and Murray are shown looking shocked.) Jeff Probst: Stop the challenge. We’ll bring the medics in.
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Posts: 556 12/06/11 04:03 PM Reply Quote More Recent Posts	I give you episode 2. Finished it much much earlier than expected. I wouldn't expect them to be up this close together in future, but I'll do my best to put the episodes up on a somewhat regular basis. Once again, thanks for all your comments. I really appreciate everyone who's taking the time to read this and enjoying it. Praise and criticism are always welcome so if you have a suggestion, just let me know. Enjoy :) Episode 2 – ‘Testosterone Time’ Day 4 Spoiler [+] INTRO: 17 CASTAWAYS REMAIN GOMA Vera walking onto a beach Murray pointing at something off camera Serena carrying logs Caroline tying her hair back Roger splashing someone during a challenge Maria crawling through a muddy field under a cargo net Rafael paddling in a rowing boat Anna catching a ball 39 DAYS RAITUHN Neil sprinting towards the camera holding an immunity necklace Samantha balancing on a balance beam Joe smashing a tile in mid air Lina smiling at something off camera Gael running through shallow water Petra falling into water holding a war club Robin vaulting over a wooden obstacle Sabine sitting by the cmapfire Andy shouting toward the sky. ONE SURVIVOR SURVIVOR: MALDIVES GOMA TRIBE – NIGHT 3 (The GOMA TRIBE can be seen arriving at their camp.) Serena (confessional): I was so happy that David was voted out last night. However, I wasn’t so happy that people voted for me. It seems very convenient that there were 4 men, who we all saw talking together, and I got 4 votes. It ain’t rocket science. (Serena is seen walking close to Roger and Murray, who are sitting on the beach.) Serena (sarcastically): Thanks guys. Roger (confessional): I think Serena’s convinced I voted for her last night. I know I didn’t, but at the same time, I don’t want to let Rafa and Murray know it was me who was the 5^th vote. They suspect it was Maria. I’m not going to let them think otherwise. Murray: I’m just going to ignore her. RAITUHN TRIBE – DAY 4 (Sabine is show sleeping in the shelter as others are up and about in the background. Petra pokes her head in.) Lina (softly): Honey, you want breakfast? (Sabine stirs and looks up at her.) Sabine (whispering): Thanks. Lina (confessional): I don’t think Sabine is doing too good at the moment. She’s been really quiet since we got here, not really done much to help out. And she’s slept in every morning so far. I don’t think she realised how tough it was going to be. (Lina hands her some rice and walks back out of the shelter. Joe and Gael are standing outside) Joe: She okay? (Lina shrugs.) Lina: She seems sick. I gave her some rice, so hopefully she’ll feel better soon. Gael: I guess she’s gotta give her body time to adjust, right? (We cut to later as Sabine is shown walking out of the shelter, towards the trees. Robin is sitting on the beach.) Robin: You okay? Sabine: Just give me a minute. (Robin cringes as he hears her throwing up.) Robin (confessional): Sabine had a little bit of rice about an hour ago, and she’s already thrown it up. People are saying she’ll be fine in a few days, she’ll get it out of her system. But I don’t think she will. She’s really dragging down the mood at camp. (Sabine emerges.) Robin: You want some water? (Sabine nods her head.) GOMA TRIBE – DAY 4 (Rafael and Roger are in the water. Maria, Caroline and Anna are watching them on the beach.) Caroline (confessional): On the beach today, Maria was like (she drops her jaw) and drooling over Rafa. She’s worse than the modelling casting directors I’ve worked with. Maria (under her breath): He’s so hot. (Caroline smirks behind her back.) Caroline (confessional): I’m not sure if I should tell her, but I’m pretty sure Rafa’s gay. I mean, he hasn’t checked me out yet and I’m the hottest girl here so (shrugs) that’s a pretty telltale sign. Plus, I’m pretty sure he was checking out some of the guys butts during the first immunity challenge. I think I’ll keep it to myself for now though, just while I’ve got a front row seat to her pathetic attempts at flirting. (Rafael exits the water and walks over to the girls.) Maria: You catch anything? (Rafael shakes his head.) Maria: Awww, you want to talk about it? (We see Caroline trying her best not to laugh.) Rafael (confessional): Me and Roger, we tried to catch some fish with a makeshift net. We still don’t have fire, but we thought we might get some practise. But no luck. (Rafael is shown opening treemail.) Rafael: GUYS, TREEMAIL!!!! Rafael (confessional): Treemail sort of implied we’re playing for fishing stuff. That’d be a real big help to our tribe. TRIBAL REWARD CHALLENGE: Jeff Probst: Come on in guys. (RAITUHN and GOMA stand on their colour matching mats. Two assault courses are laid out in front of them.) Jeff Probst: RAITUHN, getting your first look at the new GOMA tribe. David, voted out the first tribal council. (RAITUHN look over at GOMA as they enter.) Jeff Probst: You ready for today’s challenge. Petra: YES! (No-one else answers. The castaways laugh as Petra laughs along, slightly embarrassed.) Jeff Probst: Good to see at least somebody’s with us. Okay, here’s how it will work. · You will take part in an obstacle course, which is split up into 3 stages. The first stage you will climb a high wall and walk across a balancing beam. Fall off, you start again. Stage 2, you will army crawl through a muddy field under a cargo net. Stage 3, you will have to go over and under 2 sets of obstacles, before one tribe member hits a gong. No tribe member is permitted to start the next stage until all tribe members have completed the previous stage. Go too early, you will have to repeat that stage. The first tribe to have all tribe members finished and hit their gong wins reward. Jeff Probst: Want to know what you’re playing for? (Jeff opens a pack to reveal fishing material.) Jeff Probst: Hooks, bait, a spear, a rod, a snorkal. All things that will come in handy if you want to fish out here. GOMA, as you don’t yet have fire, you are also playing for flint. Worth playing for? (The tribes agree.) Jeff Probst: RAITUHN, you have one extra member. One person must sit out. Remember, the same person cannot sit out of back-to-back challenges. Who’s it going to be? Neil: Sabine. Jeff Probst: Okay. Sabine, take a spot over there. The rest of you, I’ll give you a moment to strategise, then we’ll get started. (We cut ahead to the tribes, ready to start.) Jeff Probst: For reward, Survivors ready. Go! JEFF COMMENTARY: · GOMA off to a good start. Rafael making quick work of the balance beam. · Samantha almost loses it. A little stumble. · Serena slips and takes a hard fall. Has to start Stage 1 again. · Robin steadies himself, but his sudden pause causes Lina and Gael to fall. · GOMA almost finished. All waiting for Serena...and she falls again. · Andy stop! You can’t go yet, Lina’s foot was still on the beam. You have to do it again. · GOMA finished. Starting on the mud crawl. · Andy’s off. RAITUHN, you can go. · Roger making quick work of the crawl. · Samantha a little stuck, holding Petra up. · Maria’s ploughing through. · Serena, being pulled the last stretch by Roger. · Raituhn and GOMA are neck and neck as they start stage 3. · Robin, with an impressive vault over the obstacle. · Both tribes making light work of Stage 3, this will be close. · Ooh, Murray hits his head going under that obstacle. Got to hurt. · RAITUHN’s done. Joe running to ring the gong. Jeff Probst: RAITUHN wins reward. (RAITUHN celebrate. Jeff hands Joe the fishing gear.) Jeff Probst: GOMA, I’ve got nothing for you, head back to camp. I’ll see you in a few days. RAITUHN TRIBE – DAY 4 (The tribe returns to camp.) Joe: Awesome job guys. Lets try this stuff out. (Andy looks on, incredulously.) Andy (confessional): Joe, he’s still pissing me off. He thinks he’s some sort of leader, ringing the gong after the challenge, giving everyone a pep talk, telling everybody good job. And Gael’s like his deputy. Who do they think they are? Andy (under his breath): Jackass. (Samantha hears him and turns her head.) Samantha (confessional): Andy, he has some serious problems. He’s not used to being told what to do. Typical male behaviour in my opinion. (Gael is in the water trying to fish. Joe sits on a green rowing boat, fishing rod dangling in the ocean) Gael (confessional): The waters are beautiful. The coral reefs, and all the fish around. Breathtaking. And to top it all, I caught a fish. (Gael is seen stabbing a fish and bringing it to the surface.) Joe: Good job, Gael. Gael (confessional): Joe got a couple with the rod as well. Really felt good to have food other than rice. (Joe and Gael return.) Gael: Look what we got guys. Petra: Good job!. (Andy is shown shaking his head.) Andy (to himself, mocking Petra): Good job!. Day 5 Spoiler [+] GOMA TRIBE – DAY 5: Caroline (confessional): Serena absolutely sucked in the challenge today. I mean, she actually had to be pulled through part of it. I helped her vote out David last night, but I’m sure he could have done it without assistance. (Roger is shown trying to start a fire.) Roger (confessional): Spirits are low. Everyone’s hungry, they’re backs are aching because of the shelter, and we have no fire. Today, I’m going to put all my efforts into getting that fire started. (Serena is eating a mango nearby.) Roger: Serena, can you help for a sec. Serena: I guess. (Serena reluctantly walks over.) Roger: Can you hold this for me? (Serena holds something down as Roger continues to start the fire. She looks disinterested.) Roger (quietly): I wanted to let you know, I voted for David last night. (Serena looks up, suddenly more interested.) Serena: Really? (Roger nods.) Serena: I thought you were in an alliance with the guys. Roger: They think so too. Serena: So who are you aligned with? Roger: I’m still open. (Serena raises her eyebrow.) Serena (confessional): I was helping Roger start the fire today, and he told me he didn’t vote me out last night. Which means one of the girls did. Hmmmm. (Smoke begins to form .) Roger: I think I got it. (Roger begins to blow as fire starts.) Serena: It’s starting, it’s starting. Roger: Yes! Roger (confessional): It felt so good to get the fire started. Not only was it good for our morale, I showed that I was a provider, guarantees my safety if we go back to tribal council. Murray: That’s really cool. Anna (confessional): I was really happy when we could boil the water, because I meant we could drink it. Everyone was so thirsty, it felt good just to have a cup of water again. (GOMA stands in a circle holding cups of water.) Murray: To Roger. (They clink their cups together.) RAITUHN TRIBE – DAY 5 (Sabine is shown sitting on the beach. She looks unhappy.) Sabine (confessional): My Survivor experience is no way how I expected it to be. I’m feeling so ill all the time. I can’t eat without throwing up, and the lack of food means I’m tired and have no energy. Survivor is partly a social game, but I don’t have the energy to talk to anyone. Plus, I’m really missing my kids and my husband. (Petra is now sitting next to her.) Petra: You wanna talk? (Sabine begins to cry and rests her head on Petra’s shoulder.) Sabine: I’m really missing my kids. I’m just always thinking about them, I’ve never been away from them for this long. (Andy stands nearby.) Andy (to himself): Oh come on! Andy (confessional): Sabine, she’s just bumming everybody out. She should just go home. I can’t wait to vote her out, just so I’ll feel okay about smiling again. (Petra looks over.) Petra: Did you say something? Andy: I just think she should cheer up, that’s all. She’s bumming me out. (Petra stands up and walks over to him.) Petra: Show some respect. How’s she gonna cheer up when you’re on her back? (Their voices begin to raise as they continue to talk.) Andy: Why the (censored) is she here in the first place, if she can’t even survive 4 days?! Petra: This! From the person who got upset because nobody’s massaging his massive ego. Andy: Better to think something of myself then mope all the damn time. (Lina and Robin have now walked over.) Robin: Guys, you need to calm down? Andy: Why should I calm down!? I’ll do what I damn well want. (Sabine has now stood up.) Sabine (almost in tears): Please, stop arguing for my sake! If I want to argue, I’ll do it myself. (She sighs.) I’m gonna go lie down. (She walks off, as Petra looks down embarrassed. Andy shrugs.) Petra (confessional): Andy, urgh! He’s the most obnoxious person I’ve ever met. He’s pissed he’s not in charge and he’s taking it out on innocent people like Sabine and me. He’s pathetic. (Petra, Lina and Robin are now sitting by the fire.) Petra: I just hate him so much! Lina: You shouldn’t have taken the bait. Petra: I know, I know. Lina (confessional): Petra’s young, the youngest member of the tribe in fact. I think that causes a problem in the case that she thinks with her heart rather than her head. She’s really sweet and kind, which I’m not complaining about, but she shouldn’t have felt the need to defend Sabine’s honor. It draws attention to herself in a negative light, which puts a target on her back, plus she partly hurt the feeling of the person she was trying to defend. Robin: We just don’t want to see you hurt your chance out here in the process. We want you here. Day 6 Spoiler [+] GOMA TRIBE – DAY 6 (Anna is shown opening treemail.) Anna: We have mail. (She pulls out a note, and something that looks like a football.) Anna: Oh wow. Anna (confessional): At treemail today, we got a football. We were told to practise, as it would help us in today’s Immunity challenge. (A group are shown playing catch with the ball. Rafael runs and makes a catch.) Maria: Nice catch. Maria (confessional): We’ve been practising all morning, and everyone seems to be doing great. We haven’t won a challenge yet, but I’m feeling quietly confident. (Anna catches the ball. She smiles.) Anna: I caught it! (Murray runs over and high fives her.) RAITUHN TRIBE – DAY 6 (Joe, Gael, Robin, Neil and Petra practise with the football.) Neil (confessional): Some of us had a practise with the football this morning. Would have been good to get everyone involved, but it didn’t happen. Sabine’s still sick, which worries me, as we sat her out for the reward challenge, so she has to participate today. Could really drag down our performance. Neil (to Samantha): Don’t you want to join in? (Samantha shakes her head.) Samantha (confessional): The men were up, playing with the football. Trying to show their bravado. I didn’t see a point in being part of that. I’ll let them have their testosterone time. (Andy is shown laying down by the fire.) Andy (confessional): Got myself a few more Z’s this morning. It seemed like the immunity challenge would be football based. Me, I was quarterback on my high school football team. I know I’m good, so why waste my energy practising. TRIBAL IMMUNITY CHALLENGE Jeff Probst: Come on in guys. (The tribes walk onto a beach. Coloured flags, marking out a pitch and endzones, are shown in the water sticking out of the shallow water close to the shore.) Jeff Probst: First things first, RAITUHN, I’ll take back the immunity idol. (Lina hands it over.) Jeff Probst: Thanks, Lina. (He places the idol on a plinth.) Jeff Probst: Immunity, back up for grabs. · The challenge will work as follows. This (he holds up a round ball with exotic markings) is a ball used in a variety of games here in the Maldives. Today, we’re going to play a game we’re calling Maldivian football. Starting from a centre point, your aim is to get the ball into your opponent’s end zone, marked by flags in their tribes color. You will have to work as a team to both attack and defend, deciding whether to pass or run at any given moment. Get the ball in your opponents end zone you score a point. First tribe to 3 points wins Immunity. Jeff Probst: For the winning tribe, Immunity, another few nights with your tribe. For the losers, tribal council, somebody going home tonight. RAITUHN, you’re sitting someone out, can’t be Sabine. Who will it be? (RAITUHN take a moment to discuss.) Samantha: I’ll sit out. Jeff Probst: Samantha, take a spot on the beach, everyone else, get yourselves in the water, take a moment to strategize. Then we’ll begin. (We cut ahead to both tribes on opposing halves of the pitch. The ball floats in the middle.) Jeff Probst: For Immunity, Survivors ready. Go! FIRST POINT: (JEFF PROBST COMMENTRARY IN CAPS) · ROGER GRABS THE BALL FOR GOMA. LOOKING FOR THE PASS · Murray: Over here · MURRAY’S GOING LONG. INTERCEPTED BY ANDY. · ANDY’S SPRINTING, CAROLINE TRIES TO TACKLE HIM, SHE JUST GETS BLOWN BACK. · ANDY, WITH THE FIRST TOUCHDOWN, ALMOST ALL BY HIMSELF. · Andy: Hell yeah! Come to Papa! SECOND POINT: RAITUHN lead 1-0 · ROGER, GETTING THE BALL AGAIN FOR GOMA. SHORT PASS TO RAFAEL THIS TIME · GAEL TARGETS HIM. RAFAEL PASSES IT TO MARIA JUST IN TIME · RAITUHN’S ENDZONE, BEING BLOCKED BY JOE. TOWERING OVER MARIA. · Anna: Maria, over here. · MARIA PASSES BACK TO ANNA, WHO SLIPS THROUGH. TOOK RAITUHN BY SURPRISE. · ANNA SCORES FOR GOMA. · Anna: Oh my God, oh my God, oh my God! · Rafael: Way to go, Anna! · Anna: I’m never good at sports. · Rafael: Looks like that practise paid off. THIRD POINT: TIED 1-1 · ANDY GETS A SWIFT GRAB. TRIES TO RUN AGAIN BUT TACKLED BY ROGER WITH A BIG SPLASH · Andy: Dammit!!! · ROGER BEING PERSUED BY LINA. HER SIZE LETTING HER DOWN ONCE AGAIN. · Lina (under her breath): Way to draw attention to my weaknesses, Jeff! · ROGER STILL WITH THE BALL. MURRAY’S OPEN, ACCEPTS THE PASS. · MURRAY TACKLED BY ANDY. HAS THE BALL AGAIN. HE’S RUNNING THE SHOW TODAY. · ANDY NEEDS TO PASS, LOOKING OUT FOR ANY OPEN TEAMMATES. GOMA DOING A GOOD JOB BLOCKING RAITUHN’S KEY PLAYERS. · Andy: Here goes nothing. Sabine!! · THE BALL SOARS TOWARDS SABINE. SHE’S NOT PAYING ATTENTION. · Petra: Sabine, look out. · SABINE, HIT IN THE FACE WITH THE BALL. TAKES A HARD FALL. (Sabine disappears under the water. She doesn’t emerge.) (Lina and Murray are shown looking shocked. Caroline raises her hand to her mouth.) Caroline: Oh my god, she’s not getting up. Jeff Probst: Stop the challenge. We’ll bring the medics in. (The medics rush in and haul Sabine up and to the beach. The other castaways worriedly look on. A close-up is shown of Andy, looking pissed. Sabine is awake but seems woozy) Medic: She has minor concussion. Should be fine soon, dangerous that it caused her to be submerged in the water for that period of time. She’ll need to sit out the rest of the challenge. (Sabine takes a seat next to Samantha.) Jeff Probst: Ok, Survivor rules state that, as Samantha is already sitting out, she cannot be brought back in. RAITUHN, you have the choice to forfeit the challenge or carry on with 7 players. Joe: We’re not forfeiting Jeff. Jeff Probst: OK. We’ll replay that point. Everybody, get back into positions, we’ll restart. THIRD POINT REPLAYED – TIED 1-1 · ROGER GRABS FOR GOMA. HE SIGNALS DOWN THE LINE. THROWS DOWN THE LINE TO RAFAEL. · HE’S ON HIS OWN. NO-ONE FROM RAITUHN IS CLOSE ENOUGH. · RAFAEL SCORES. QUICK POINT, GOMA WORKING WELL AS A TEAM. Andy: Come on! Seriously?! Gael: Keep it down, okay? Andy: Shut up! FOURTH POINT – GOMA LEAD 2-1 · ROGER AND ANDY GRAB AT THE SAME TIME. NEITHER WANTS TO LET GO. · CAROLINE TRIES TO HELP ROGER, ROBIN MANAGES TO MOVE HER AWAY. · IMPRESSIVE DISPLAY OF STRENGTH FROM BOTH MEN. NEITHER WANTS TO LOST THIS POINT. · Andy: Let go you (censored). · Anna: Did he just say what I thought he said?! · ROGER LETS GO. CAN’T HOLD ON. · BUT WAIT, ROGER DUCKS DOWN, SPLASHES ANDY, BLINDING HIM WITH THE WATER. · GREAT TACTICS, THE DISTRACTION ALLOWS CAROLINE TO STEAL THE BALL. · SHORT PASS TO MURRAY WHO PASSES IT TO RAFAEL. · GOMA SCORES. Jeff Probst: GOMA wins Immunity, 3 to 1. (GOMA celebrate with a group hug. Andy begins to punch the water. Robin gives him a confused look.) Jeff Probst: Who wants the idol? (Anna grabs it as the team all put a hand on top.) Jeff Probst: GOMA, you are safe from tribal council tonight, nobody going home. RAITUHN, unfortunately, you will be joining me at Tribal tonight. One of you will be voted out. You have some to decide, head back to camp. GOMA TRIBE – DAY 6 Anna (confessional): The mood at camp right now, I almost can’t describe it. Everyone’s so happy we won that challenge. Especially me, because I got one of the points. I’ve never been overly good at team sports so it was a real big achievement for me. (Anna is holding the Immunity Idol.) Anna: Where should we put it? Murray: Put it on the column. Murray (confessional): One of the corner columns of the shelter has some space on top, so we decided to put the idol up there, looking out onto the ocean. Like our protector or something. Serena: He’s not moving from that spot. Rafael: He? Looks more like a woman to me. (Serena laughs.) Vera: Women don’t have arms like that. What kind of women have you dated? (Rafael shrugs his shoulders and laughs.) Vera (confessional): It was good to just joke around, relax. Not have to worry about something. Since day 1 we’ve had the shelter drama, and the lack of fire and the challenge losses. Now we have fire, we have immunity, and we want to keep it this way. (The tribe are shown sitting round the fire, laughing and joking.) RAITUHN TRIBE – DAY 6 (Sabine is shown sitting down at camp. A bruise seems to be forming on her head.) Sabine (confessional): Today at the challenge, I felt really embarrassed. I think it’s obvious to the tribe and myself that I’m not cut out for this game. (Joe, Gael, Neil, Petra, Lina and Robin are talking in a group.) Joe: I don’t think we have a choice. She obviously wants to go home. Joe (confessional): After the challenge, it’s looking more and more likely that we have to get rid of Sabine. It sucks because she seems like a perfectly nice person, but she’s not holding up well, her hearts not in it because she’s missing her kids and she’s hardly spoken to us. Petra: So we’re keeping Andy? Gael: He single-handedly got us the one point we got. He’s obviously going to be useful. Sabine’s going to drag us down. Lina: But how can we work as a team when he’s causing tension? Robin: We could always get rid of him closer to the merge. How about we make a pact, keep him for now to help us win challenges but we make sure he’s gone before the merge. Neil: I like that idea. Neil (confessional): 6 of us, Robin had the idea we all make a pact that Andy wouldn’t be here for the merge. I went along with it but I think it’s a pointless idea, Survivor doesn’t work like that. It’ll all come down to whether he can help me in the game at that point in time. At the moment, I think he should stay. A few days from now, who knows? Tribal Council Spoiler [+] TRIBAL COUNCIL – RAITUHN Jeff Probst: Come on in guys. Pick up a torch, light it in the fire. Fire represents your life in this game. (The tribe members take a seat. Neil is shown wearing his immunity necklace from the first immunity challenge.) Jeff Probst: Neil, you have immunity tonight from the challenge on day 1. Has that had an effect on your strategy these past few days. Neil: I don’t think it has. I haven’t sat back and relaxed, because you can’t do that in Survivor. I’ve got to know my tribe members, spoken to people, do my best to win challenges. Stuff I would have done with or without this immunity. Jeff Probst: Sabine, I have to talk to you. Everybody saw that you sustained a nasty injury during today’s challenge. Do you think your performance will have a bearing on the vote tonight? Sabine: Definitely Jeff. Can I say something to the tribe? Jeff Probst: Of course. Sabine: I didn’t get a chance to speak to people about the vote before Tribal tonight, so I’m going to say this now. I don’t know how you plan to vote tonight, but I’d ask that you vote for me tonight. Jeff Probst: Asking for votes? So you’re quitting? Sabine: I wouldn’t say I’m quitting. I’d say that I’m giving the rest of my tribe a chance. I would love to stay, but we all know I’m not coping well, physically and mentally. You all deserve to be here, and I don’t want to see anybody leave, only for me to break down and quit or be medevaced out of a spot they could have had. (Petra is shown wiping tears away.) Jeff Probst: Petra, you’re obviously finding this very emotional. Petra: I don’t want her to go. She’s so kind and genuine, I can think of other people who should go before her. Jeff Probst: Like who? Andy: Like me, Jeff. Jeff Probst: And why is that? Andy: Because I spoke my mind. I basically said what Sabine was just saying now, and she completely laid in to me. Lina: It’s different coming from you though. Petra: I think he’s very lucky. He was this close (holds thumb and first finger close together) to leaving tonight. Sabine: I’d like to say something to Petra before the vote. (Petra turns to looks at Sabine, behind her.) Sabine: You really remind me of my own daughter, in that you’re kind, you’re smart, you’re caring. But she has a problem with keeping her emotions to herself when she’s upset or gets mad. If you keep that in mind and try and be more composed, I think you could go far in this game. And I want you to go far, because you talked with me, comforted me, made me feel welcome. (Petra gives Sabine a hug.) Jeff Probst: A very touching moment. Vote almost feels pointless anyway, but no-one is requesting we don’t so...Neil has immunity, can’t vote for him. Everyone else is fair game. (RAITUHN casts their vote. Shown voting confessionals below) Petra (voting for Sabine <3 x): I hate to make this vote, but I understand it’s for the best. I know your kids are dying to see you, give them a hug from me when you see this. Sabine (voting for Andy): I can’t vote for myself, so I’m voting for you Andy. You’re very lucky you’re staying for 3 more days. Andy (voting for Petrah): Surprise! Looking forward to seeing the look on your face when this vote comes out. You’re just a little girl in a man’s game. Jeff Probst: I’ll go tally the votes. (Jeff leaves the main council area and returns with the voting urn.) Jeff Probst: Once the votes are read, the decision is final. The person will asked to leave the Tribal Council area immediately. I’ll read the votes. First vote, Sabine Sabeen Petrah (Petra looks upset. She looks at Andy, who winks at her, smirking.) Andy, that’s 2 for Sabine, 1 for Petra, 1 for Andy Sabine Sabine <3 x Second person voted out of the Maldives... Sabine, that’s 5, that’s enough. Jeff Probst: If you could bring me your torch. The other votes will remain a mystery. (Sabine walks over with her torch.) Jeff Probst: Sabine, the tribe has spoken (Her torch is snuffed.) Jeff Probst: It’s time for you to go. Sabine: Good luck, everybody. (She leaves. Petra and Lina are shown wiping away tears. Joe has his head bowed.) Jeff Probst: A very emotional first tribal council for your tribe. You might think this is an exception, but you’ll soon find out, emotions often run high at Tribal Council. How you deal with those emotions could make or break your time out here. Grab your torches, head back to camp. I’ll see you tomorrow. (The tribe leaves tribal council.) Sabine’s last words: I’d like to thank everybody for letting me on here. Even though it didn’t work out how I wanted, I wouldn’t change it for anything. I can’t wait to see my beautiful children and husband again. And Petra, you better take my advice on board. Don’t let mean people get to you, it’s only a game. Tribal Council Votes Andy: Petrah Gael: Sabine Joe: Sabine Lina: Sabeen Neil: Sabine Petra: Sabine <3 x Robin: Sabine Sabine: Andy Samantha: Sabine
Alex Shallow		#13	[-]
Posts: 5502 12/06/11 08:17 PM Reply Quote More Recent Posts	Oh my gosh Sabine was such a OTTP angel. So sad to see her go but I loved Petra this episode! I'm definitely keeping my eye on Petra. Also Andy reminds me of Ben from Samoa and I hope he suffers the same fate which is being a pre-merge boot.
Cool Beans		#14	[-]
Posts: 556 12/08/11 04:04 PM Reply Quote More Recent Posts	Alex Shallow wrote: Oh my gosh Sabine was such a OTTP angel. So sad to see her go but I loved Petra this episode! I'm definitely keeping my eye on Petra. Also Andy reminds me of Ben from Samoa and I hope he suffers the same fate which is being a pre-merge boot. Glad you liked the episode. Thanks for the comment. Spoilers for episode 2: Spoiler [+] It may interest you to know, I originally planned for Sabine to try and convince the tribe to keep her, only for them to get rid of her anyway. Petra would have still been upset, but more because Sabine was, in her eyes, unfairly booted over others. As for comparing Andy to Ben from Samoa, I haven't actually seen Samoa yet so I can't comment on similarities but I have a story arc for Andy which I hope the readers will find interesting. If you've read the episode, please take the time to comment if you have the chance. All feedback is greatly appreciated. Any favourite castaways so far? Anyone you want to see more of and learn more about?
merman		#15	[-]
Posts: 158 12/10/11 12:39 AM Reply Quote More Recent Posts	Goma is awesome.
humanhumanitarian		#16	[-]
Posts: 1042 12/10/11 03:12 AM Reply Quote More Recent Posts	Agreed. I like pretty much everyone on Goma. Not really anyone to root for on Raituhn besides Petra so far though, so that would be something I would like to see..
Cfc		#17	[-]
Posts: 1737 12/10/11 06:05 AM Reply Quote More Recent Posts	Favorites : Anna, Joe and Petra!!! ^^ Andy is just like :@ OTTN5
Cool Beans		#18	[-]
Posts: 556 12/10/11 08:29 PM Reply Quote More Recent Posts	Again, thanks for all your comments. Good to see some Goma fans, hopefully I'm able to showcase Raituhn a bit more in the upcoming episodes. I have some good news for my own life, which means bad news for this fic. I now have a job (Yay to employment) but this means my time where I'm able to write this fic will be cut down quite a bit starting from next week. I will do my very best to get the episodes up as quickly as possible but I can't promise anything majorly quickly. Episode 3, "Machete-gate", is almost done. Just Tribal to write and a proof-read to work out any niggles. Hopefully should be up some time on Sunday (London time).
Cool Beans		#19	[-]
Posts: 556 12/11/11 11:27 AM Reply Quote More Recent Posts	I present episode 3. Enjoy. Episode 3 – “Machete-gate” Day 7 Spoiler [+] RAITUHN TRIBE – NIGHT 6 (The tribe are seen holding their torches as they make their way back to camp.) Petra (confessional): Tonights tribal, I found it very emotional. I hated to see Sabine leave because she seemed like such a good person. But I guess this game’s not for everyone. (The tribe are seen back at camp, settling in for the nights sleep.) Joe (to Petra): You okay? (Petra nods as Joe gives her a hug.) Petra: Why does Andy still have to be here? Joe: Stop worrying about him. Just worry about yourself. Petra (confessional): To make things worse, Andy voted for me, and he made it clear it was him to me, not that I wouldn’t have guessed. (Andy can be seen finding a spot in the shelter.) Joe: Get some sleep, it’s sure to make you feel better. RAITUHN TRIBE – DAY 7 (Andy is shown sitting on his own, eating rice.) Andy (confessional): Tada. Still here, and it feels fantastic. I knew before I started this game that I’d have trouble keeping my thoughts to myself, but if someone pisses me off, I can’t hide it. However, it means no-one wants to particularly talk with me. (Neil walks over to Andy and sits down next to him.) Neil: How are you this morning? Andy (sarcastically): Oh wow, someone’s actually talking to me. Neil (confessional): Andy...let’s just say he isn’t the easiest person to get along with. But...I thought I’d take the time to speak to him, get to know him a bit better. He’s kind of an outcast right now, and so being able to give him a good impression of me, it might help me out later on in the game if he sees me as an ally. Neil: You’re a firefighter, right? Andy: I am indeed... Neil (confessional): Surprisingly he was quite friendly and chatty once we got going. His temper and aggression just seems to let him down. (Neil gets up.) Andy: It was good to speak to you man. GOMA TRIBE – DAY 7 (Caroline is sitting on the beach next to Vera.) Vera: what’s it like, working at such a classy restaurant? Caroline: Er...well...er, it’s quite tough... Caroline (confessional): I feel so stupid, telling that lie about where I work. Turns out Vera goes to that restaurant I said I waitressed at quite regularly and she’s always asking me about it. Just on and on and on... Vera: I just love the way they cook the salmon there, you know. What goes into that signature sauce, because I swear I can taste dill. Caroline (obviously struggling): Er...yeah...dill. Erm, I think some...lemon?... Vera: Possibly. Vera (confessional): I was talking with Cara earlier about food, and it’s just making me so hungry. One can only survive on rice and mangoes for so long. So I decided to a little exploring, try and find some edible plants or something. (Vera is shown leaving the campsite holding a basket and the machete.) Caroline (confessional): With Vera gone, I wanted to a little stirring. I want Vera gone so she’ll stop harassing me. If I can convince other people to vote with me, it’ll make my time here a whole lot easier. (Anna is eating a mango in the shelter. Caroline approaches her.) Caroline: Hey, did you hear what Vera was just saying? Anna: No, what? Caroline: (She looks over her shoulder quickly.) Don’t tell her I told you this but she was practically saying that she was better than me because she’s an actress and I’m just a waitress. Making me feel really small. (Anna looks shocked.) Anna: Oh my God! I can’t believe she would say that. That’s so harsh. Caroline: I know, tell me about it. (We cut to a bit later as Caroline is talking with Murray.) Murray: She was really saying that?! Caroline: Mmhmm. I think that Immunity win in the first challenge really went to her head. Murray (confessional): I’m not sure whether I should believe what Caroline’s telling me about Vera. It’s not like I can definitely say if it was said or not, but it all seeming a bit suspicious to me. (Vera returns to camp. She puts the machete in the shelter.) Serena: You find anything? Vera: No, unfortunately not. Caroline (under her breath): Bummer!! RAITUHN TRIBE – DAY 7 (Lina scrunches up her face.) Lina (confessional): Everybody stinks. Including me. We haven’t been able to properly wash ourselves in 7 days, and I thought I’d be used to the smell by now, but it’s just not happening for me. I think I’m starting to be able identify people by smell at this point. (Robin, Lina and Gael are talking by the treeline. Robin is scratching his head.) Robin: This feels disgusting. Robin (confessional): My hair is so greasy right now, that if I do this (he runs his hand through his hair, and the hair stands up. He points at it) that happens. It’s like I’m secreting hair gel right now. Some sort of soap products or shampoo would be a Godsend right about now. (Gael is shown opening Treemail and then returning to camp.) Gael: Guys, we got mail. (The tribe gathers round as he begins to read it.) Gael: Your task today is simple Matching is the aim You’ll smell like a bed of roses For succeeding in this game Neil: Sounds like soap Robin: Or shampoo. Lina: We have to win this! GOMA TRIBE – DAY 7 (Roger finishes reading the treemail.) Anna: Soap will be so good right now. Maria: Matching? Has to be like remembering stuff, right? Maria (confessional): Today’s challenge sounds a bit more mental based, which is good. We’ve had 4 very physical challenges so far, so it will be good to give our body’s a rest for once. Rafael: How’s your memory? Maria: I’d say it’s pretty good. Rafael: Do you remember how old I am? (Maria thinks for a moment.) Maria: 25? (Rafael nods.) Rafael: The girls good! (Maria laughs.) TRIBAL REWARD CHALLENGE: Jeff Probst: Come on in guys! (The tribes enter.) Jeff Probst: GOMA, getting a look at the new RAITUHN tribe, Sabine, voted out the last Tribal Council. Serena: Was she okay after the challenge? Samantha: A bit bruised but she was okay. Jeff Probst: Okay, time to get to today’s reward challenge. · For today’s challenge, we thought we’d give time for the 2 tribes to interact with each other, whilst testing your memory skills. Each tribe member will have their own station, inside which are 4 items, related to island living. Your goal is to find another castaway with a matching item, every time you do it’s a point for your tribe, whether it’s with someone from the other tribe, or your own. Peeking is allowed, so you might want to keep an eye on what your fellow castaways see. Tribe with the most points, wins reward. Jeff Probst: Want to know what you’re playing for? (Both tribes react positively. Jeff unveils the reward.) Jeff Probst: Shampoo, soap, toothbrush, toothpaste, conditioner, nail clippers...tons of stuff you can use to freshen up, get smelling good again...or if not good, a little better than you do now. Robin: Awesome. (Rafael is shown smiling and nodding.) Jeff Probst: Worth playing for? Roger: Definitely. Jeff Probst: Okay, we’ll draw for spots and we’ll get started. (We cut forward to see the tribe members standing behind boxes on stools, in their respective tribe colours.) Jeff Probst: We’ve selected the order by random draw. Roger, you to go first... (Note: Not all moves are shown.) Roger: Er, Leela, is it? The pretty girl... Lina: It’s Li-na Roger: I’m sorry. Lina: Don’t worry about it? Roger: Lina, do you have a shell? (Lina shakes her head.) Jeff Probst: No match for Roger, Robin your turn. Robin: Er, Roger, do you have a feather? Roger: Nope. Jeff Probst: Still no matches. Murray? Murray: Robin, do you have a feather? Robin: Dammit. Jeff Probst: That’s how you play. GOMA on the board with 1. Lina? Lina: Serena, do you have a sea sponge? (Serena checks her box.) Serena: Oh gosh, I do! (She hands the item over.) Serena: This girl must be psychic, Jeff? Jeff Probst: Lina, do you have super powers? (Lina thinks for a moment.) Lina: I don’t think I should risk exposing my hidden identity, Jeff. Jeff Probst: Each tribe has 1. Serena? Serena: Errrr, small girl... Jeff Probst: Petra? Serena: Yeah, Petra Petra (playfully): Heeeey, I’m not that small. Neil: You can’t deny you’re small. Petra: But small girl? No-one wants to be small girl? (The castaways laugh.) Serena: Petra, you got driftwood? Petra: I do. (Cut to later.) Gael: Roger, do you have a shell? Roger: I said it earlier, didn’t I? (Gael nods.) Gael: You sure did. Vera: Andy, do you have a coconut husk? (Andy checks his box, and then blows a raspberry while holding a thumbs down.) Jeff Probst: That’s a no? Andy: What do you think, Jeff? Jeff Probst: Ok, Petra? Petra: Andy, do you have a shell? (Andy reluctantly gets it out as Petra does a little victory dance.) Jeff Probst: Petra, very happy about that. Petra: Just a little tip, you’re not meant to have your box wide open. Jeff Probst: Are you saying you peeked inside? Robin: She’s saying we all got to peek inside. (The castaways laugh while Andy looks slightly embaressed.) Jeff Probst: Anna, you’re next. Anna: Andy... (She pauses as Andy looks at her.) Andy: Just put me out of my misery. Anna: Just give me your coral. Andy: Dammit!!! Jeff Probst: Samantha? Samantha: I’ll take Andy’s feather off his hands. Andy: At least it’s my own tribe mate this time. Jeff Probst: Maria? Maria: Not this time, I’m taking that driftwood. Andy: I’m all out. Jeff Probst: Andy, completely picked clean. Andy: It was like vultures, Jeff. Jeff Probst: The tribes neck and neck with 4. Neil: Caroline, do you have a sponge I could borrow? (Caroline peeks in her box.) Caroline: Not today. Roger: I wouldn’t mind borrowing it. Neil: Crap! Jeff Probst: Roger, with another point for GOMA. Now 5-4. (cut ahead) Murray: Lina, do you have a coconut husk? Lina: No..... Murray: I think you do. (Lina checks.) Lina: Oh wait, you’re right. My apologies. Jeff Probst: How were you so sure, Murray? Murray: I saw her arranging it. Jeff Probst: Remember, be very careful with your box. GOMA now leading 6-4, they’re on a roll. (cut ahead) Joe: Vera, do you have a seed? Vera: I do. (cut ahead) Gael: Caroline, can I have your rock. (Caroline rolls her eyes.) Caroline: If you must. (cut ahead.) Neil: Hey, Grease Lightning? Robin: Are you talking to me? (Neil nods.) Jeff Probst: Why’s that? Neil: Have you seen his hair? Anyway, I know you have a rock for me. Robin: Only if you stop calling me names. Jeff Probst: RAITUHN storming ahead, now on 9 to GOMA’s 6 (cut ahead) Joe: Robin, buddy. You better have a feather left? Robin: I already gave it away. Joe: Oh man. Jeff Probst: You need to pay attention to what people have already said. Caroline? Caroline: Joe, you got a feather? Joe: This sucks. Jeff Probst: See how that cost you? GOMA with 9, RAITUHN on 10, very close. (cut ahead) Neil: Caroline, you let me down before, don’t let me down again. Driftwood, please. Caroline: Come get it before I get mad. (cut ahead) Jeff Probst: RAITUHN now has 16 to GOMA’s 11. RAITUHN need one more to win the game. Lina, you could win this for your tribe? Lina: Maria, please say you’ve got a seed. Maria: I do. Jeff Probst: RAITUHN wins reward. Come and get it. (RAITUHN rush over and begin to smell the different products.) Jeff Probst: GOMA, I got nothing for you, head back to camp. RAITUHN TRIBE – DAY 7 Robin (confessional): We were so happy we got the reward today. We definitely needed it. That, plus I got two beautiful ladies to wash me. (We see Robin in the water, covered in soap suds, as Petra and Lina rub the soap in.) Robin (confessional): It was heaven....My wife’s gonna hate me. (Robin submerges himself in water and lifts his head out.) Robin: I’ll think I’ll stay in here for a sec. Neil (calling from beach): You get too excited? Robin: No comment. Petra: Ew (She and Lina walk away, leaving Robin on his own.) Lina (confessional): We thought we might be able to ration all the soaps and shampoos and all the things like that, but by the time everyone had had a chance to wash, we’d almost run out of everything, which sucks because, even though we smell good now, we won’t in a few days. (A bit later on, some tribe members are sitting on the beach.) Samantha: Everyone smells really good. (Andy can be heard singing nearby.) Lina: I think Andy’s a bit more tolerable when he doesn’t smell. (Samantha begins to laugh.) Samantha (confessional): Andy sucked in the challenge today. He let everybody see his box, so he got picked clean. Obviously, he’s not so hot on more mental challenges compared to physical ones. Maybe we don’t need him like we thought we did. GOMA TRIBE – DAY 7 (Members of the tribe are sitting on the beach and in the shelter.) Roger: Has anyone seen the machete? Roger (confessional): After we got back from the challenge, nobody could find the machete. It’s really odd, because I could have sworn I knew where it was before we left. The machete’s really important for the tribe, to help get firewood, open coconuts and things, so we really need to find it. (SeVeral tribe members can be seen looking.) Rafael: No luck so far. Maria: I don’t understand where it could have gone. Rafael: Who had it last? Caroline (confessional): I think I remember Vera taking the machete with her when she went on her little expedition this morning. Whether she brought back, that’s another matter. This could be the perfect opportunity to get her out if we have to go to tribal council. However, I’ve got to be careful with what I say, so I don’t make myself look guilty either. Caroline: Has anybody taken it outside camp for any reason? (Vera raises her hand.) Vera: I took it out with me this morning. Roger: Did you put it back? Vera: I think I did. Vera (confessional): I’m pretty sure I had the machete with me when I came back this morning, and I put in the shelter in its usual place. But now doubts have been raised and the machete’s still missing, and I’m beginning to question myself. Did I bring it back? Murray: The sun’s going to set in about an hour. We should just focus on looking for the daylight we have left. (The other tribe members agree.) Day 8 Spoiler [+] GOMA TRIBE – DAY 8 (Caroline is show waking up. She begins to step out the shelter as something catches her eye. She looks through the logs that make up the shelter floor. A glint of metal can be seen.) Caroline (whispering): Oh my God. Caroline (confessional): When I woke up this morning, I found the machete. Looks like it fell through the logs in the shelter, it was built so crapily that it was able to fall through, and I don’t think we can get it out without taking the shelter apart. However, I’ve decided to keep it to myself. If it’s still missing, the suspicion on Vera remains, which is a good thing for me, as I want her out of here. (Vera is shown looking through the jungle) Vera (to herself): Where are you? Vera (confessional): I tried to retrace my steps this morning, hoping I could find the machete but no luck. I still think I brought it back, but the longer it stays missing, the more I doubt myself. We really need immunity today if I have any chance of staying. (Vera returns to camp.) Rafael: Was it out there? (Vera shakes her head and begins to cry. Rafael walks up to her and gives a comforting hug.) Vera (crying): I put it in the shelter. I (sniff) swear I did, Rafael: It’s okay, don’t worry about it. Rafael (confessional): It really hurt me to see Vera upset like that. It’s looking like we’ll never know a definite answer about whether she lost it but...if she did, she’s obviously really upset about it. I don’t want this to turn into a massive witch hunt. (The entire tribe is gathered around the campfire, listening to Vera.) Vera (upset): I’m not saying I definitely lost it, but if I did, I’m so sorry. I’m really really sorry. It wasn’t intentional. (She breaks down in tears again as Rafael hugs her again.) Caroline (confessional): I did feel a little bit sorry when Vera was breaking down, but we have to remember, Survivor isn’t fair. I’m just helping to get rid of someone who I think could put me in danger down the line. Serena (confessional): Vera’s little breakdown. You don’t to that if you did nothing. Sure sounds guilty to me. RAITUHN TRIBE – DAY 8 Joe (confessional): I’m becoming more and more worried about Andy. His behaviour is just excluding himself from the group. We all ate breakfast together this morning except him, I’m not sure where he was, but he needs to try and integrate with us. He’s got off on the bad foot with some people but I don’t want to see him get hurt. (Joe and Gael are talking while walking through the jungle.) Joe: I don’t know what to do about him. Gael: Do we need to do anything about him? He’s brought this on himself. Joe: I don’t want anyone to feel like an outcast. Joe (confessional): As the oldest person on this tribe, I feel partially responsible for everybody here for some reason. I just don’t want this whole situation to get worse. (We cut to the beach, where Samantha is sitting on the beach. Joe and Gael approach her.) Joe: He showed up? (Samantha points down the beach, where Andy can be seen standing in the shallow part of the water.) Samantha: He’s been there for about a half hour. Joe: I’m gonna talk to him. (Joe approaches Andy. Andy doesn’t acknowledge him.) Joe: Where were you this morning? Andy (still not looking at Joe): Went for a walk. Joe: Look at me, man. I’m reaching out to you. It’s not too late to mend things to certain people. You keep up like this, you’re only gonna make life worse for yourself out here. (Andy doesn’t answer.) Joe: Suit yourself. Remember, I’m always here when you want to talk. (Joe returns to the main RAITUHN tribe.) Joe: He doesn’t want to talk. Gael (confessional): Seems to me Andy’s trying to get sympathy, which he doesn’t deserve in my opinion. The way he shouted at Petra, you don’t do that to any woman, let alone someone as young as her. I’ve got no time for him. TRIBAL IMMUNITY CHALLENGE Jeff Probst: Come on in guys. (The tribes stands on a small dock just off the beach. Across a stretch of water, there is a high scaffold with hanging tiles in front of it.) Jeff Probst: Roger, I’ll take back the idol. Ok, Immunity, back up for grabs. Here’s how it’ll work: · Each tribe will have 5 swimmers, 1 keymaster and 2 puzzle solvers. One at a time, the swimmers will swim out, climb to the top of the platform and, using a war club, jump off and smash one of the tiles. This will release a key. Once the swimmer comes back with the key, the next swimmer can go. Once all 5 keys have been collected, the keymaster must use the keys to open a chest, then the 2 puzzle solvers will use the puzzle pieces inside, to complete the map of the Maldives. Jeff Probst: Make sense. Rafael: Yep. Jeff Probst: I’ll give you a moment to strategise, then we’ll get started. Jeff Probst: Survivors ready. Go! · Rafael and Andy first out. Andy moving extremely fast. · Andy’s back, gives RAITUHN a big early lead. Petra heading out. · Rafael’s back. Caroline swimming for GOMA. · Petra smashes her tile, gets her key, is back for RAITUHN. Gael next. · Caroline misses her tile, sets GOMA back further. · Caroline and Gael get back at the same time. GOMA one swimmer behind. Roger and Lina heading out. · Roger can’t find his key. RAITUHN extending their lead with Robin, their last swimmer on the course. · Roger gets back, swimmer number 4 for GOMA is Maria. Can she make up for lost time? · RAITUHN has all their keys, Joe opening the chest. · Anna getting the last key for GOMA. · RAITUHN has their chest open extremely quickly, Samantha and Neil working on the puzzle. · GOMA has all their keys. Serena working the locks. · Samantha and Neil, really struggling with the puzzle. Remember, it’s a map of the Maldives. · Murray and Vera working on the puzzle now for GOMA. · RAITUHN think they have it...it’s not quite right. Gives GOMA a chance here. · GOMA very close. RAITUHN very close, this is down to the wire. · RAITUHN thinks they have it. Jeff Probst: RAITUHN wins Immunity! (Murray slots the final piece into the place as RAITUHN celebrate. Vera comforts him.) Vera: You were amazing, look how close that was at the end. Jeff Probst: RAITUHN, the idol is yours, no Tribal Council tonight. GOMA, one of you will be leaving the game tonight. You’ve got a few hours to make your decision, I’ll see you later. (All RAITUHN members put a hand on the idol as GOMA walk away dejected.) RAITUHN TRIBE – DAY 8 (A close-up of the Immunity Idol is shown, followed by the tribe members around camp.) Andy (confessional): There was no doubt I was in danger if we went to tribal tonight, so I was so happy that the tribe pulled through. Although...it was the big lead I gave us in the beginning that saved our asses, and I think the tribe should appreciate that somewhat. (Andy is in the shelter. Petra approaches him.) Petra: Congrats in the challenge today. (Andy nods to her in appreciation.) Andy: Ditto. Andy (confessional): I even got a thanks from Petra. That’s as rare as like...Tom thanking Jerry or something. Petra (confessional): I recognise I should try and at least be civil to Andy. He may be an asshole, but he won us that challenge today seeing it was so close at the end, so I thought I’d let him know he did well. I want to take Sabine’s advice to me to heart, and if that means tolerating the devil, I’ll see what I can do. (Gael is seen tending to the fire.) Gael (confessional): People were fawning over Andy after the challenge but...I’m not kissing his ass. We all contributed, they’re just giving him the attention he wants. I’m not falling for nothing. The sooner I get his troll ass outta here...the better. (The tribe sits round the fire.) Joe: We did great today guys! Really proud of all of you. Joe (confessional): I feel like I’m becoming a sort of leader to the tribe. We need some sort of structure and I believe me taking that role can help us come together and succeed in challenges. Joe: If we be strong, we can succeed. GOMA TRIBE – DAY 8 Vera (confessional): Coming back from the challenge, I knew my head was in the guillotine, because of Machete-gate, which I’m now calling it. I tried to do my best to get some solid votes against somebody else. (Vera is talking with Maria and Rafael) Vera: What are you guys thinking for Tribal? Rafael: Do you think you could get enough votes to save you? Vera: I don’t know. Rafael (confessional): I don’t think Vera deserves to go tonight. She didn’t lose the machete on purpose, so at worst it was a mistake. And we all make mistakes. Plus, I think she fits in nicely with our group. Maria: I was thinking we could vote for Cara. Vera: How come? Maria: She approached me yesterday, was being really bitchy about you. Saying you said stuff about how you were better than her. (Vera looks shocked.) Vera: No way!!! Vera (confessional): It really hurts when I hear somebody said something like that behind my back, especially when they were being so nice to me. (Vera is now talking to Roger and Serena.) Vera: What do you guys think? Serena: I’ll think about it. (Roger nods.) Tribal Council Spoiler [+] TRIBAL COUNCIL – GOMA Jeff Probst: Come on in guys. Take a spot. (The survivors sit on the seats at Tribal Council.) Jeff Probst: OK, 2 days, 2 challenges you lost. Maria, how does that affect morale around camp? Maria: I think it definitely has an effect. We just have to try and lower the effect, but it’s hard, especially with what happened. Jeff Probst: Can you enlighten me on that? Maria: Vera went for a walk with the machete yesterday. Sometime after she got back, the machete went missing, and this whole witch hunt started around her. Jeff Probst: Vera. Want to give your side? Vera: I took the machete out, I admit that. But it never left my side and I put it back in the shelter when I returned. I’m sure of it. Jeff Probst: So you think someone else took it? Vera: I don’t want to accuse anybody. Jeff Probst: Did anybody use the machete after Vera? (Nobody answers.) Jeff Probst: Anybody see the machete? (Nobody answers. Caroline shakes her head.) Jeff Probst: Caroline, you’re shaking your head. Caroline: I didn’t see it, and I don’t think anybody else would have because we all know it’s not at camp. Jeff Probst: You’re sure of that. Caroline: It’s the only logical explanation. (Vera scoffs.) Vera: This, from the woman who was supposedly bitching about me behind my back to people yesterday, while playing up to me to my face. It’s like you want me gone. Caroline: I wasn’t bitching. Vera: That’s not what I’ve heard. Jeff Probst: Anna, have you seen any of this so-called bitching? Anna: I have to be honest, Anna did mention Vera to me but... (Caroline can be seen staring at Anna, in an almost threatening manner.) Anna: ...erm, I don’t think it was bitchy. Murray: There was definitely a bitchy tone to it Jeff. To me it was anyway? Caroline: Well, it wasn’t intentional. Vera: I find that hard to believe. I wouldn’t surprise me if you hid the machete yourself, just to blame it on me and let me get sent home. Caroline: You’re not worth the effort. Jeff Probst: That’s a very strong accusation. Anyone want to respond to that? Roger: I don’t think anybody did anything on purpose, and I don’t think we should be accusing each other of a purposeful spiteful act. It was an accident, we all know it was. This isn’t time for conspiracy theories. Jeff Probst: OK, it’s time to vote. Rafa, you’re up first. (GOMA casts their vote. Shown voting confessionals below) Vera (voting for Cara): If what I’ve heard is true, you’re the most 2 faced person I’ve met. Caroline (voting for Vera L): I think getting you out of here well help me in the game. If you’re watching this from home, I want to apologise to you for not telling anybody about the machete but, this is a game. Sometimes you need to fight dirty. Maria (voting for Caroline): You’re not to be trusted. Jeff Probst: I’ll go tally the votes. (Jeff Probst leaves and returns with the voting urn.) Jeff Probst: Once the votes are read, the decision is final. The person will asked to leave the Tribal Council area immediately. I’ll read the votes. First vote, Caroline. Vera Cara Vera, 2 votes Vera, 2 votes Caroline Caroline Vera L, 3 votes each Vera (sorry) 3^rd person voted out of Survivor: Maldives... Vera (Vera shakes her head.) Jeff Probst: Vera, If you could bring me your torch. Vera: When you guys find that machete, let me know. (Vera walks over to Jeff.) Jeff Probst: Vera, the tribe has spoken. (Jeff snuffs out her torch.) Jeff Probst: It’s time for you to go. (Vera leaves Tribal Council.) Jeff Probst: Another interesting Tribal Council. You seemed to be working well together a few challenges a go. Trusting each other. In the space of 2 days, you’re back to square one. Grab your torches, head back to camp. (GOMA leaves Tribal Council.) Vera’s Final Words: It’s been a rollercoaster for me, winning the immunity at the beginning, to being voted out in that was just over a week later. I’m sure of myself that I put the machete back. I hope nobody hid it deliberately, I’m sure it’s round there somewhere. Tribal Council Votes: Anna: Vera (sorry) Caroline: Vera L Maria: Caroline Murray: Vera Rafael: Caroline Roger: Vera Serena: Vera Vera: Cara Don't forget to comment. Episode 4 (working title "Pain in the ass") will hopefully not be too far away.
Alex Shallow		#20	[-]
Posts: 5502 12/11/11 11:54 AM Reply Quote More Recent Posts	Ugh Caroline is such a bitch. I'm totally not liking her at all whatsoever. Vera was so robbed. Also Anna seems like such a weak girl she reminds me of Natalie Tenrelli. Other then that I liked the episode. It was nice to see Petra and Andy get along a bit after the challenge but I still feel like Andy will continue to be on the chopping block over at Raituhn. Raituhn is my favorite tribe at this point though I am a Serena fan. Though maybe a tribe swap happens soon. Who knows?
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