Great stuff.
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XianneKei |
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...but I wanna know now!
Great stuff. |
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LeeLeeRaRa |
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I'm breathless with anticipation!
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Penalty Shot |
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The dragon is dead! All is right with the universe.
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cginspace |
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Killed for being heartless. |
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LeeLeeRaRa |
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Tiki! Next installment please!
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Tiki Lou |
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Sorry. It's coming up this afternoon. Internets on the fritz at home and they're making me work at my job. Honestly, even though I'm ecstatic about
the results, this'll take the tale into a different direction. I'll make it work though
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Tiki Lou |
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The force of DamLa's crying attack coupled with Risall's sword thrown into the heartless dragon's chest caused and explosion that blew back both the Knight and the Siren. Risall, the Monkey Knight was the first to regain his senses. Gathering his senses and rising unto his legs, a sharp pain erupted in his side causing him to double over in agony. He braced his arm over his side, hoping he hadn't broken any ribs. There was still much to do and he needed to be in top shape for what was to come. Off in the distance, the blackened heap that was the dung-breathing dragon, D'Goke, was still smoking. The Knight's enchanted sword still embedded in his chest and sticking straight up. Some way off, DamLa the Siren lay on her side, the explosion knocking her unconscious. Still holding his side, Risall shuffled painfully towards the dragon's body, focusing on the sword that he must retrieve. The lower half of the blade still visible and shining in the sunlight. With every step closer, Risall worried that the Dragon would rise again but there was no movement from the smoldering behemoth. With pain still coursing through his side, he got to the Dragon's side and climbed on top of the beast's enormous belly. Placing both hands on the hilt of his sword, he exhaled slightly to recoup his strength and release his sword... But before he could do anything, D'Goke stirred and rose from where he lay. The Monkey Knight fell off the hulking dragon's body, losing grip on his sword and landing heavily on his side. The pain intensified and shocked him into immobility. D'Goke rose fully upright and took a few moments to shake the soot from his face. Seeing the paralyzed Knight beneath him, the Dragon scooped him up in one of its taloned claws. Squeezing tightly, Risall roared in pain, his arms held tightly in the dragon's hand. "YOU...!" D'Goke bellowed out of breath and still feeling the pain of the last attack, "you dare... think you can defeat... ME!" The Dragon squeezed tighter causing the Monkey Knight to howl even louder. "You cannot break... the prophecy! Now... you will finally... find your destiny!" The Dragon cocked its head back, ready to blow a barrage of dung into the Knight he held.
With every ounce of strength he had, the Knight bent his legs and kicked the hilt of his sword, sliding it fully into the dark heart. D'Goke was stunned! He dropped Risall at his feet and grabbed both his own throat and clutched at the sword. The dung he meant to spew at the Monkey was now lodged into his throat, choking him. The dragon pulled the sword out of it's heaving bosom and threw it down, but a fountain of black blood poured out onto the ground. He could not even cry out in pain, the dung blocked his air passages. Flailing uncontrollably, D'Goke again fell onto his back, heaving and thrashing like a fish out of water. The spasms slowed within moments and the
Dragon finally lay still. The spectacles he prided himself on lay inches away as the Dragon tried reaching for them.
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taks |
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Hurrah, my favorite reality TV week ever!
Two dragons slayed in two days! |
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XianneKei |
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Kudos to you Tiki Lou!
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LeeLeeRaRa |
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Bravo!
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cginspace |
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and the Gods?
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JumpinJackBauer |
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Jessica A Wakefield wrote:It's |
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Tiki Lou |
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Everything stood still... not even the air moved as the pupils of the dung-breathing dragon dilated and finally sparkled no more.
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taks |
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Please start writing the next set of epic novels, I will be first in line to buy them.
Definitely got the mood correct and I could not be happier (with the real outcome or these chapters). |
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