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Was there any particular reason to get rid of my link to the cast document, Antithesys? I haven't abandoned this. It premieres tomorrow.

<A small fishing boat is shown from a distance as it sails down a river surrounded by numerous trees on each side. The camera then zooms in on the boat and Jeff Probst.>
Jeff Probst: I’m sailing down river in the middle of the jungles of Cambodia. Surrounding me are ruins of an ancient civilization that used to thrive here: the Khmer Empire. It’s been centuries since humans have lived in these ruins, but that…is about to change.
Jeff Probst: We’ve taken a change from the classic Survivor with beautiful beaches and crystal blue water to a more unforgiving jungle locale. Sixteen Americans are about to embark on the adventure of a lifetime. They come from all different walks of life and will be forced to blend and form their own civilization. For thirty-nine days they will be forced to work together while surviving the elements…and each other. They must learn to adapt or they will be voted out of the tribe.
Jeff Probst: In the end, only one will remain to claim the prize of one million dollars. Thirty-nine days, sixteen people, one SURVIVOR.

DAY 1
<All sixteen castaways are shown rowing toward a dock where Jeff Probst is standing. There are four men and four women in each of the two boats. One has a green trim and the other has an orange trim.>
Jeff Probst: Welcome to Survivor: Cambodia. Now, you are about to embark on probably the biggest adventure of a lifetime. Each have you have already been assigned to a tribe. You guys <points toward the boat with the green trim> are MEKONG. Your tribal color is green. <Jeff throws a bag of green buffs to Sara who is sitting at the front of the boat. She then takes a buff and passes the bag around to the rest of her tribe.>
Jeff Probst: You guys <points toward the boat with the orange trim> are THNOT. Your tribal color is orange. <Jeff throws a bag of orange buffs to Tyler.>
Jeff Probst: You all are now on your own. Here are your maps to finding your tribe’s camp. There will be a box of supplies waiting for you there, including a map to water. You’ll be all set. MEKONG, you will head north, while THNOT, you will head south. Make yourselves comfortable; you’ll be here a while. Head out.
<Both boats head out in opposite directions. The camera quickly zooms out to an overhead view of the river as the boats row on to their new camps.>

MEKONG – DAY 1

Sara-CONFESSIONAL: It was really hard to contain myself excitement on the boat ride. I was so anxious to get the game started.
Jackie: Are we almost there?
Scott: I hope so. My arms are getting tired.
Scott-CONFESSIONAL: It seemed like we were rowing for hours, but I think it had only been like thirty minutes. After that, we finally reached our camp.
Aiden: I see the flag!
Jim: That’s it, alright.
Aiden-CONFESSIONAL: The first thing we did was open up the supply box. We knew that everything that we needed was in there. Once it was open, we could start setting up.
Jim: <reading> Welcome to the jungle. For the next thirty-nine days you will have to learn to live off the environment. All of your tools are right in front of you. You have been supplied with eight canteens, one pot to boil water, a map to a water supply, a piece of flint to start a fire one machete, one tarp, and one box of rice. This should help get you started. The rest is up to you.
Jim-CONFESSIONAL: The supply box came with a note that gave us instructions on what to do next. I think I was the only one who was okay with so little supplies. I used to teach people how to survive in these situations with less supplies than we have now. I think my tribe will see that I’m valuable and won’t vote me off.
Jim: Okay, so do you ladies want to go get the water?
Tina: Yeah, where are the canteens?
Ashlei: We can each take two.
Jim: The guys can stay here and start working on the shelter. Who else knows how to make fire?
Gary: I’ll try.
Jim: Okay, Gary can work on the fire. The ladies are on the water, and the other guys have the shelter. Sounds like a plan.
Tina-CONFESSIONAL: Jim’s background kind of gives him a little bit of an edge over all of us, because he has been trained and has trained others how to live in situations like this. He’s come across acting like he’s the only one who knows what he’s doing, when he’s not.
Jim: No, that goes over there.
Aiden: Here?
Jim: Yeah.
Tina-CONFESSIONAL: <continued> If he doesn’t ease off on giving orders, I think his assertiveness could cost him in the long run.


THNOT – DAY 1

Kate: I see the flag!
Kate-CONFESSIONAL: When we got to camp we were given this supply box with some instructions inside of it.
Kim: <reading> Welcome to the jungle. For the next thirty-nine days…
Tyler-CONFESSIONAL: As I was looking around I noticed that we had a lot of young people on our tribe. I mean, by the looks of it, I could see our tribe dominating in these upcoming challenges.
Kim: Can we just take a moment to take in the adventure we’re about to begin?
<Everyone looks around in silence while Kim bows her head and closes her eyes.>
Tyler: Moment over, let’s get to work.
Kim-CONFESSIONAL: I kind of wanted to have a THNOT meditation, but I guess some of the young kids just wanted to get to working right away.
Tyler: Kate and I are going to get water. Can we have all the canteens?
Kate: I’ve got the map.
Kate-CONFESSIONAL: Tyler and I kind of had an immediate connection.
Tyler: “Can we just take a moment to take in the adventure we’re about to begin?”
Kate: <laughs>
Kate-CONFESSIONAL: <continued> I mean, Tyler’s a fun guy. He reminds me of my friends back home, which is kind of comforting. Now, about being more than just friends: I’m not sure yet. <laughs>
Tyler: You know, we could keep this map to ourselves and keep the water supply hostage.
Kate: Then no one would vote us out right?
Tyler: Yeah.
Tyler-CONFESSIONAL: Kate…she’s hot. I could definitely see the two of us going far together. As far as out personal relationship goes, I’m not really opposed to anything at this point.

Kim: What do you do for a living?
Oscar: Uh, I manage a supermarket.
Kim: Are you from Cuba?
Oscar: Originally, yes.
Kim: I can tell by your accent.
Oscar-CONFESSIONAL: My family grew up poor in Cuba. So, I saved up a bunch of money to come to America. I worked like four jobs a day every day. Looking back, it was all definitely worth it. I mean to come from virtually nothing to having something…anything is just a blessing. I mean, I have a wife and a kid, who I feel that I can support with bringing food to the table every night. Back in Cuba, I couldn’t do that. My life has changed a lot since I moved to America. I mean, look at where I am now. I am in the jungles of Cambodia!

Marc-CONFESSIONAL: I don’t think my tribe really knows what they’re doing. I mean, you have Kate and Tyler going off to get “water”. Kim is starting conversations with just about everyone here. Everyone else is just sitting around doing nothing, taking in the moment, I guess. I mean, we have to survive out here for thirty-nine days. We’re not getting anything done right now. Am I the only one on this tribe that’s planning on staying here for a while?
Marc: Hey, do we want to get shelter and a fire going?
Kim: I can do fire.
James: I’ll help work on shelter.
Melissa: Me too.
Marc-CONFESSIONAL: It finally took me asking them that motivated them to get working. I’m on a tribe with a bunch of lazy kids. Great! <rolls eyes>
Melissa: We need more big leaves. I don’t want to be sleeping while rain is falling on me.
Marc: We won’t get that wet. Besides, these trees will protect us from most of the rain.
Melissa: Yeah.
Melissa-CONFESSIONAL: I’m not used to being outdoors so much. I’ve camped before, but not for a month. The hardest part for me will be sleeping without pillows, blankets, or a mattress. Nights are going to suck out here. I don’t know how much of them I can take, either.
Melissa: Imagine like all the bugs crawling around.
Marc-CONFESSIONAL: Did Melissa sign up for the wrong game? This is Survivor. Yes, you’re going to have to sleep with the bugs in the rain. If you can’t handle that, then get out. This game is for people who can handle it.

MEKONG – NIGHT 1

Jackie: Day one is officially over! Only thirty-eight more to go.
Sara: Yeah.
Jackie-CONFESSIONAL: Overall, I think our tribe has been pretty successful today. We have a fire going; we have water; and we have a satisfying shelter. MEKONG is off to a great start. I think we’re going to kick butt in the first challenge.
Jackie: How are you hanging in, Gary?
Gary: I’m doing okay.
Gary-CONFESSIONAL: I’m the oldest guy out here. I’m not the strongest, but I think I could be the wisest, you know, having all that life experience. <laughs> The only downside of being the old guy is being a target. I’m old and weak. Those are two good reasons to get rid of me right off the bat. I think that I have the most to prove out of everyone here. I have to stand up for all seniors out there and show that we can hang in there with people half our age.
Gary: I just hope I don’t slow you guys down in the first challenge.
Jackie: You won’t.
Gary: That would send me right on out of here.
Jackie-CONFESSIONAL: Gary’s concerned about his age being a factor in this game. I don’t believe that it will be the case. I think that he is fully capable of doing anything he sets his mind to.
Jackie: I’m going to bed. Are you going to watch the fire for a while?
Gary: Yeah, I’ll stay.
Jackie: Feel free to come get one of us when you get tired. You need your rest too.
Gary: I’ll be alright.
Jackie-CONFESSIONAL: <continued> I just hope he doesn’t try too hard to prove himself, as if he needs to. He’s sixty-two years old and he’s competing with people half his age. I’ll congratulate him on that.

<Everyone is lying in the shelter>
Jackie: Man it’s tight in here. Is there any room for me?
Scott: I’ll scoot over.
Aiden-CONFESSIONAL: Sleeping was really crowded on the first night. Everyone wanted enough room under the tarp in order to stay dry. Luckily, Gary tended the fire, so there was a little more room, but still, it was hard to get to sleep that night.
Aiden: I’ll be lucky if I get any sleep tonight.
Ashlei: No kidding.

Immunity Challenge – Boulder Dash

Jeff Probst: Come on in everybody.
<Both tribes are shown walking in and standing on their corresponding green and orange mats.>
Jeff Probst: Three days in. MEKONG, how are things going?
Gary: It’s going –
Jim: It’s going good. We’re working well together. I’m very happy with my tribe.
Jeff Probst: <smiling> THNOT?
Melissa: The shelter’s not the greatest but other than that, it’s okay.
Jeff Probst: Sounds like everyone’s doing alright. Okay, before we get to the challenge, we need to discuss your treemail from yesterday.
Marc: The idol.
Jeff Probst: I’ll give you one clue its whereabouts: it’s not exactly in plain sight, but it is not buried somewhere underground. Now, if you find the idol, you can choose to keep it a secret, tell someone else, or even assign it to someone else if they need it. However, once one idol has been used, the other becomes useless.
Jackie: What?
Jeff Probst: So that means, if you hold on to it too long and someone else uses it, yours becomes powerless. So, use it fast, but only when it is necessary to use. Alright, let’s get to today’s challenge.
Jeff Probst: This <unveils a small golden idol> is what you’re playing for.
Kate: Wow.
Tyler: <to tribe> We’ll get it.
Jeff Probst: Win this, and you’ll be guaranteed at least three more days in this game? Worth playing for?
Tina: Yeah!
Jeff Probst: Here’s how today’s challenge is going to work. Each tribe will start off here at this starting line with a giant boulder in front of them. Your goal is to push this boulder through an obstacle course and make it back here. The first tribe to do that wins immunity. This boulder is pretty heavy, so be careful. Take your spots and wait for my go.

Jeff Probst: This is for the first immunity. The winning tribe will be here for three more days. The losers are going to Tribal Council and will be voting out the first person in this game. Survivors ready? GO!

<Both tribes begin pushing their boulders. THNOT takes a bit of a lead heading toward the first obstacle. THNOT arrives at the first roadblock: a series of logs laid down in the middle of the course. MEKONG arrives right behind them. Tyler and James begin pushing the boulder over the logs as the rest of their tribe stands back. All eight MEKONG members are pushing their boulder over the logs. They make fast time of the obstacle and move on. Tyler is shown signaling the rest of his tribe for reinforcement. They quickly run toward the boulder. THNOT finally clears the first obstacle. MEKONG is shown approaching the second obstacle: a large net of sticks and twigs. They begin forcing the boulder through the sticks. As they clear the obstacle, THNOT approaches. Melissa can be heard saying “they’re way ahead of us”. THNOT pushes their boulder quickly through the sticks and twigs, making up some ground on MEKONG. MEKONG approaches the final obstacle: the swamp. They begin struggling to push their boulder through muddy water, waist-high. THNOT is shown closing the gap. They then enter the swamp. As THNOT pushes their boulder through the swamp, they begin to pass MEKONG. Both tribes are neck-and-neck upon exiting the swamp. It now becomes one last push to the finish. Kim is shown falling down. At this moment, MEKONG takes a very small lead. Both tribes are pushing their boulders closer and closer to the finish line. Jeff Probst is says, “All members of the tribe must cross the finish line.” Kim falls down again and is picked up by James. Tyler is now shown shouting “Come on!” MEKONG then increases their lead. They approach the finish line. Their boulder crosses, followed by Jim, Aiden, Jackie, Tina, Ashlei, and Scott. THNOT’s boulder then comes toward the finish line. Sara assists Gary in crossing the finish line before all members of THNOT are able to cross.>
Jeff Probst: Sara and Gary are across! MEKONG wins immunity!
Jim: Yes!
Sara: Good job, Gary.
Tyler: <censored>
Jeff Probst: <handing the immunity idol to Jim> Here you are. It was a very close race; you guys earned it. MEKONG is safe from the vote tonight and keeps their tribe together. THNOT, unfortunately, I don’t have as good news for you tonight. Tribal Council is tonight, where the first person will be voted out of this game. You’ve got the rest of the day to make your decision. I’ll see you tonight. Head on out.
<MEKONG is shown with everyone’s hands on the idol. THNOT heads out and Tyler looks back at MEKONG, then shakes his head.>

MEKONG – DAY 3

Tina-CONFESSIONAL: Winning the challenge today was phenomenal. It boosted our tribe’s morale so much.
Ashlei: That was really close, you guys.
Jim: They’re going to be tough to beat again. We have to stay strong or we’ll start losing.
Aiden: Did you see that one dude? He was so pissed.
Aiden-CONFESSIONAL: They definitely had the advantage with two big strong guys on their team, but we were able to pull off a victory by a hair. That just shows that power isn’t everything; you’ve got to have teamwork, and we’ve got it.
Sara: Gary, you were awesome.
Gary: Thanks.
Gary-CONFESSIONAL: I was most concerned about losing that challenge. If we lost, I could’ve easily been blamed for being the slowest, but we won, so I’m guaranteed at least three more days out here. <exhales deeply> That’s a big sigh of relief for me.
Jim: Hey, we’re running low on water. Who wants to make a water run?
Jackie: Can’t we just, like, you know, take a break. I mean, that challenge wore us out.
Jim: What would you rather do, be tired or be dehydrated?
Jackie: I’m just saying…
Jim: So am I. Fine, I’ll go get it myself so you all can have your “break”.
Sara-CONFESSIONAL: Jim just keeps getting more and more annoying. He doesn’t realize that every one of us wants him gone. He better watch what he says, or we’ll vote him out in a heartbeat.
Jackie: He just needs to chill, you know?
Aiden: No kidding.
Tina-CONFESSIONAL: Even when we win a challenge, Jim quickly changes the mood around camp from a celebration to work. I don’t know what he’s thinking. He’s setting himself up to get voted off. Luckily, we’re not going anywhere tonight, otherwise, I think he’d be gone. Someday, we might have to go, and if he doesn’t calm down, he’ll be the first one voted off.
Jim: Well, as usual, I do all the work around here.
Jim-CONFESSIONAL: I understand that we just won, but we still have to deal with the survival aspect. If we’re not healthy, we’ll lose, and I don’t want to lose. I plan on pounding the other tribe in every challenge. So, we need to be ready. We won today, but who knows what will happen tomorrow? We could lose every single challenge that is to come. It’s not impossible. They’re a tough team, and they’re not going to take this first loss lightly.

THNOT – DAY 3

Tyler: I’m so <censored> pissed that we lost today. We should’ve won that challenge.
Tyler-CONFESSIONAL: We had it today toward the end, but Kim just blew it. If she could’ve kept herself up, we wouldn’t have had to stop for her and would’ve won. As far as I’m concerned, she’s going home tonight.
Tyler: Kim blew it.
Kate: She didn’t blow it. We didn’t play smart at those obstacles.
Melissa: You and James did all the work. The other tribe used their whole team. If we would’ve done that, we probably could’ve won.
Tyler: We could’ve won if we didn’t have Kim. That’s what I’m saying.
Kate-CONFESSIONAL: We really don’t have any other choice besides Kim. We can’t vote out one of us four. Marc and Janelle are more valuable. It’s between Oscar and Kim, and all of us are leaning toward Kim. We just need one more vote for it to be final.
Tyler: Janelle, who are you voting for?
Janelle: I don’t know, Kim?
Tyler: Convince Marc to do the same. Me, Kate, Melissa, and James are all voting for Kim. I don’t want a tie. Just vote for her.
Janelle: Okay.
Janelle-CONFESSIONAL: Kim would be the obvious choice, but I think we should consider getting rid of Melissa. All she does is complains and she drives everyone nuts. Kim didn’t screw up that bad in the challenge. If it wasn’t for Tyler being so controlling, we could’ve won. It was all about teamwork, and we didn’t have it. The other team did. That’s why we lost.
Janelle: Tyler wants to vote off Kim. He’s got four votes.
Marc: So, Kim’s gone tonight.
Janelle: Unless you want to force a tie.
Marc: With who?
Janelle: Melissa.
Marc: I’ll talk to Kim and see what she’s doing.
Marc-CONFESSIONAL: As of right now, it’s either a unanimous vote to send Kim home, or a tie with Melissa. I haven’t talked to Kim yet, but I plan on filling her in. The decent thing to do would be to let her know that she’s going home. I’d feel terrible if she didn’t know she was leaving. She doesn’t deserve to be blindsided, not her.
Marc: Kim, it could be you tonight.
Kim: Really? That doesn’t surprise me.
Marc: What are your thoughts?
Kim: Well, Oscar and I have been considering voting out Tyler. He’s too much of a leader. I think with him out, we’d have more togetherness in the tribe, you know?
Marc: I see what you’re saying.
Oscar: What’s going on?
Kim: It’s looking like me tonight?
Oscar: No.
Kim: Yeah, I’ve got four votes already.
Oscar: From who?
Kim: Tyler, James, Kate, and Melissa.
Oscar: What about voting for Tyler?
Kim: It’s up to this man and Janelle.
Oscar: Oh, I see.
Kim: Wouldn’t you like to vote with us, Marc? <smiles>
Marc: Don’t count yourself out yet. I’m still considering voting out Tyler.
Kim: Marc, if you do decide to vote for me, don’t tell me. I don’t want to be dreading it all night. I’d like to go out with a little surprise you know, so I still have some hope up until then.
Marc: I’ll do that.
Kim: Thank you.
Marc-CONFESSIONAL: Kim’s such a nice woman that it hurts to have to write her name down. I still have to talk to Janelle, but it’s the best move to make for the tribe.
Marc: Kim wants to vote off Tyler.
Janelle: Why?
Marc: He’s too controlling.
Janelle: Well, yeah, but do we really want to vote him off?
Marc: I don’t know yet.
Janelle: We’ve only got a little while longer.
Marc: I know.
Janelle-CONFESSIONAL: I’d love to see Tyler go, just so I could see the look on his face, but we need him for strength on our tribe. All I care about is making the right decision tonight. If I can do that, I’ll be okay with whatever decision I make.
Marc-CONFESSIONAL: As the sun goes down, I run out of time. I still have to make a decision. Do I want to force a tie and see the hot shot go, or do I want to go with the safe vote and see one of the most deserving people out here go? I guess I have to decide. I’m losing time.

EPISODE ONE IS OFFICIALLY UP! Below is a survey. I ask all readers to please fill out this survey. I would like to know what your opinions are about the episode. I also need your votes for the popularity poll and edgic poll. Please be as honest as possible. Thank you.



What did you think of the episode overall? Was it enjoyable? Realistic? Entertaining? What was your favorite part? Please be as detailed as you can be.

Are you looking forward to this fanfic's continuation?

Who do you think will be the sole survivor?

Who do you think will be voted off next?

Any predictions as to what is going to happen in future episodes?

POPULARITY POLL

Please rate the survivors on a scale of 1-10. 1 being the lowest and 10 being the highest. Results will be tallied and a chart will be posted.

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EDGIC POLL

For people familiar with edgic, please post your ratings for each survivor below. I plan on making an edgic chart if I receive enough interest in this poll. If anyone has any questions about where to find edgic, I can post a link to the thread.

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Thank you for reading. I plan to finish this fanfic unless very little interest is shown. So, please continue reading in order to keep this going!

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Both had a(n "older") male that took charge on the tribe and clashed with some of the younger members. I would try to vary it up a little more.

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I'll agree that Jim was supposed to be that way, but Marc, not as much. I kind of meant to make him as the brain of the tribe, not necessarily as the leader. He was just annoyed with the lazy people, but Jim was too.

I can see where you're coming from with a lot of your comments. I have most of Episode 2 written already, so you may not see a whole lot of your suggestions immediately, but I will try to use your suggestions in later episodes. I just want this to be as good as possible.

Your edgic ratings were also close to what I had intended for most characters to receive. In the second episode, hopefully some of the larger characters step into the background while some of the non-existent characters become known a little better.

I respect all of your comments. I like the fact that you explain what you are saying instead of just saying "the tribes were too similar". Thanks again for you comments, and I hope you enjoy reading the rest of the fanfic!

Thanks :)